Hi Natasha, I found you on a YA blogger list and read your sample, chapter 8. If it was a first chapter, I'd say to start with the action, but you've haggled my curiosity! Have you finished your second novel? Would you perhaps consider blogging on a short story/graphic novel called BEFORE LONG: Sheer Romance of Finding the Perfect Home, by Auralee Arkinsly? Or, a YA novel Indebted by Charmayne Hafen (Dragons)?