Paul Michael Peters
“Insensible Loss” came to me in an instant. The outline of the plot, how to tell the story, and where it would take the reader. In a 24 hour period of time I had listened to the podcast of A Way With Words http://www.waywordradio.org/insensibl... when one of the hosts Martha Barnette describes a wilderness training course. I read a writing prompt offered as part of a writer’s suggestion on Reddit that posed the idea for a quest about the fountain of youth. Finally, I watched a documentary about the future. They described that hospitals in the future would look more like airports do today than what we have considered a traditional hospital.
I can’t tell you which order these things happened. I can tell you that when Martha Barnette described the “the things that seep out of your life that you once depended on” was a thought that stuck in my head.
Unlike the first two stories I published, “Peter in Flight” and “The Symmetry of Snowflakes”, which were more personal and drawn on ideas that had bubbled in me for decades, “Insensible Loss” just came to me in a flash. It was very similar to several of the stories in “Mr. Memory”, quick and fast. Unlike the short stories, “Insensible Loss” had a clear arc of story line, the characters that needed to be in it to advance the plot, and a good sense of the complexity the story would need to be told.
Because of this instant sense of the story, I dropped the current work I was half way through, “American Appetite” and quickly cranked out a first draft for “Insensible Loss”. This was reviewed by my first round editor Steven Bauer http://www.hollowtreeliterary.com/ who had great feedback on the shape and direction. After a third Draft I sent this to JERA Publishing and worked with the lovely and talented Brooke Payne http://www.self-pub.net/ for three rounds of reviews and crafting.
I am very pleased with the story. If you consider the work from “Peter in Flight” to “Insensible Loss”, and all the story writing that has gone unpublished, I can see the progress in how I am growing. This is very satisfying for me as an author. Yes, I hope people will read this work, and enjoy it. Still, I remain selfish in the the satisfaction of completing a work, I can only share the end results to the reader, not the daily efforts endured.
I can’t tell you which order these things happened. I can tell you that when Martha Barnette described the “the things that seep out of your life that you once depended on” was a thought that stuck in my head.
Unlike the first two stories I published, “Peter in Flight” and “The Symmetry of Snowflakes”, which were more personal and drawn on ideas that had bubbled in me for decades, “Insensible Loss” just came to me in a flash. It was very similar to several of the stories in “Mr. Memory”, quick and fast. Unlike the short stories, “Insensible Loss” had a clear arc of story line, the characters that needed to be in it to advance the plot, and a good sense of the complexity the story would need to be told.
Because of this instant sense of the story, I dropped the current work I was half way through, “American Appetite” and quickly cranked out a first draft for “Insensible Loss”. This was reviewed by my first round editor Steven Bauer http://www.hollowtreeliterary.com/ who had great feedback on the shape and direction. After a third Draft I sent this to JERA Publishing and worked with the lovely and talented Brooke Payne http://www.self-pub.net/ for three rounds of reviews and crafting.
I am very pleased with the story. If you consider the work from “Peter in Flight” to “Insensible Loss”, and all the story writing that has gone unpublished, I can see the progress in how I am growing. This is very satisfying for me as an author. Yes, I hope people will read this work, and enjoy it. Still, I remain selfish in the the satisfaction of completing a work, I can only share the end results to the reader, not the daily efforts endured.
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