A Goodreads user asked James John Loftus:

Reply to previous question. I'm not talking about archaic language. I'm talking about grammar, as in incomplete sentences, gaps in thoughts, misspelled words, etc. What do you say to that?

James John Loftus Well I think somehow you've got a garbled substandard version of my book. I don't know how this happened! I am sure there are some minor mistakes I'm not perfect! But throughout, don't know about that. As to grammar incomplete sentences, I use fragment sentences for effect because I like to, I think they add a useful dimension to the action sequences. I'll put it at a FREE price on Kindle soon & download it again, perhaps, from somewhere you got a mess-up copy.

And, in summation, I have put my efforts into a new book, another historical fiction novel about Scotland. I could re-write Celtic Blood but even if no one else likes its it I do and like the style. As to flaws, it is a first novel.

I'll let you know when I put Celtic Blood out there for free.

Please give me an example of misspelt words, remember, I don't write in American English!

Thanks for the discussion your input helps me to be better at what I do. I do listen.

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