Jan Hanshaw asked Clark Graham:

OK, not a question, but a critique... no reply needed. I would love to read some of your books but after reading a sample of "A Loop in Time", I will not be able to do so. Your grammar needs work. I am distracted by incorrect grammar, as it takes away my interest in the story. Maybe you'll have found a good proofreader to edit your writing by the time I try again. I hope so; I love time travel and fantasy books. ?

Clark Graham I work real hard to make sure there are no errors in grammar or spelling. This book has gone through a critique group who have helped me immensely. All of the changes have not been posted yet. I have a backlog of things I'm working on. I will let you know when that is done. Meanwhile, I suggest you look at my book, Children of the Gods. It should be almost error free.
I'm truly sorry for the problems you encountered. Send me your email at elvenshore.gmail.com and I will gift you a copy of Children of the Gods, if you wish.

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