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message 1: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
You read mine, I read yours :)


message 2: by Leah (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 64 comments Okay, mine's not done (or even close to it), but tell me what you think so far.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 3: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
I've just read the first chapter but its very good so far! It's believable, makes sense what Peeta'd be thinking. I'll read the other chapters soon and give you more feedback!


message 4: by Leah (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 64 comments Thanks!


message 5: by Leah (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 64 comments I'm going to try to write it with the least amount of total sap that I can. I'm trying to get inside Peeta's head and write what he might ACTUALLY think, but it's hard to get inside a guy's head for a story, especially one that involves romance, when you're a girl. Tell me if his character ever seems wimpy or weeny-ish, because it's not meant to be. I'm just so used to writing from a girl's perspective because it's easier to think that way. Okay, I'm rambling now, but I think you've got the point. :)


message 6: by ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱, This is my witty title (head mod) (new)

ℂᖺαᖇᒪἷ℮ ⊰1017 &Tardis⊱ (charlie_awesome) | 766 comments Mod
Okay I will. I like what you set out to do, and it seems like its working so far. I will read the rest tomorrow and post mine them too.


message 7: by Leah (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 64 comments Okay, great!


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