The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword discussion

This is something I'm working on; any critiques/suggestions would be much appreciated!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Here's a finished product type thing:

http://ndrmag.org/nonfiction/2012/06/...

Interesting story above. There was one paragraph that stood out for me, the different definitions of various attractions. I have never heard of some of these words before.

Neither had I. I googled chronophilia, and a cornucopia of various perversions poured out of my monitor. :P