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message 2: by Jia, The lemon. (new)

Jia | 1653 comments Mod
Ah! We've got some Supernatural stuff going on! c:

I really like that you can tell that that is Jensen. You've done a great job on his eyes and hair. The lighting on his hair is very nice. His cheekbones, well his entire bone structure is very well defined. I really enjoy the shading on that.

WOW THAT EAR DOOD. Well, those ears. They look pretty banging.

His nose is very well done! It's very nice, though the lighting kind of threw me off for a second. I think you're going for a very dramatic look. But, There seems to be light coming from the side the shadow is on. Hmm, there seems to be light sources from both sides. Well, I think it look pretty smashing.

Especially that shin.

Wow his neck.

That collars are really well done.

Wow.

Though, he looks like he's either been in a bar fight or acquired some black eyeliner under his left eye.

Very nice job! I really enjoy seeing your work and you're just improving and improving and it just looks better and better and I'm going to cry because I haven't been here in so long and now I'm seeing all this beautiful work. -single tear of emotion-


message 3: by Silver (new)

Silver WOW A COMMENT I'M SO EXCITED
yes there is light coming from both sides. I was using a reference picture that had the lighting like that and I tried to ignore it and just have the light coming from the right (from our perspective) but it didn't work out so I decided to give in and just copy the reference pic.

I noticed a similar thing when I was drawing Sherlock. XD movie people like to have lots of dramatic light I guess.

lol about the left eye I know it was supposed to be a shadow >.<

thanks for the comment :D


message 4: by Jia, The lemon. (new)

Jia | 1653 comments Mod
Dramatic people require dramatic light, especially with these guys.

No problem! Very nice work! c:


message 5: by Sara, Rararasputin lover of the scatman (new)

Sara (weisthis) | 2329 comments Mod
jia just says things so perfectly


message 6: by Silver (new)

Silver I take it you like the art?


message 7: by Sara, Rararasputin lover of the scatman (new)

Sara (weisthis) | 2329 comments Mod
mhmm


message 8: by Silver (new)

Silver first time using textures



message 9: by Silver (new)

Silver not sure if I'm done with this or not. thoughts?


message 10: by Silver (new)

Silver I messed up the proportions on this, but I think the face is recognizable. :)
charcoal on newsprint paper



message 11: by Silver (last edited Mar 14, 2013 01:25PM) (new)

Silver
"I'm so sorry; it's chipped"


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message 13: by Jia, The lemon. (new)

Jia | 1653 comments Mod
I really like your drawing of Regina! I can tell who it is, though you messed up the body proportions. You have a great talent for capturing what is needed to recognise a person or character! It's really great and so is your piece with Belle and Rumple.

First, on Regina, I like the shading on the apple and her hair. And her face. I like Regina's face. A lot. Her eyes/eyebrows are VERY well done and you have drawn her expression very well.

I think drawing with charcoal is a challenge, but you have done a remarkable job! You have kept your piece very clean and it looks very nice! c:

On to Rumple and Belle! I could tell it was Rumple right away, but had a bit of a problem with Belle. (Probably because I haven't caught up with OUAT much and know Regina and Rumple better.) I really like how the backgrounds are done in these two, with the contrasting palates. They look very painterly and I enjoy them very much!

You have done a very good job capturing Rumple's face! I think this is the best out of the three here, and the lighting on his collar is superb!

Also for Belle, you haev donea great job capturing the different light sources and WOW! On the higher resolution, you can really see the work that you've put in on her dress. Splendid! I really like the shading on the hands, but I believe Belle's right (?) hand has some fingers that are a little short.

Also, I think that on all three, the shoulders are a little too narrow.


message 14: by Silver (new)

Silver Thanks! I wonder if that has to do with the fact that I have narrow shoulders XD

On Belle's right hand, I did lengthen the fingers because they were even shorter before... the first finger is bent in through the handle of the tea cup. Also I think the hand part is too short.


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Silver



message 16: by Sara, Rararasputin lover of the scatman (new)

Sara (weisthis) | 2329 comments Mod
u r gud art a+

;-)


message 17: by Silver (new)

Silver thank you both :3


message 18: by Sara, Rararasputin lover of the scatman (new)

Sara (weisthis) | 2329 comments Mod
<3


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