Deep Discusion discussion

To be a judge, fairly review this peice of writng. I wrote it so u better play fair!

One loenley day when the skys were indigo, I saw a face. Not an ordinary face. An old, dried up wrinkly face with many warts. If I was thinking any better I would run the other way, but since I didn't go to bed until 2:00 am last nite morning, I was kinda groogy and wierd. The women looked at me, her croocked nose pointed directly inbetween my eyes like it was about to shoot me.
"Hello, un 'bout scared me. Thart shall be gettin to thou hous before dusk!"

PLEASE JUDGE SPALLING TO FOR THAT WILL BE A FACTOR IN WHO WINS REAL CONTEST!

GUYS!!!! COME ON JUDGES!!!!! WHO WANTS TO BE ONE?????????

Me

Ok. you can judge the story above as your "test"