The Perks Of Being A Book Addict discussion

I am hoping you can help. I have written a novella which I hope to expand with more stories if enough people enjoy it. As this is my first book I would love your feedback (good or bad - both help me to improve!) I've made it free to make it as easy as possible for anyone to read it. It is only 20k words, so it's a nice quick read.

My book is called Getting Lucky. It's available on:
Goodreads - FREE (http://goo.gl/QHDkS)
Kobo - FREE (http://goo.gl/4w11A)
Kindle - 99c (http://goo.gl/qnvNG)

Getting Lucky is about a homeless man who meets a scientist that believes he has stumbled upon the secret to Karma. Together they must experiment to better understand the forces at work. There is also a dog. The genre that best fits is Humor.

If you do download it I would love to hear what you think.

Thanks

Craig

Thanks to all that have added it so far, and to those that have already read it and posted a review - much appreciated!

For those without e-readers I have also made a PDF copy of my book available on my website completely free - http://www.todayschapter.com/books.htm

Enjoy!

Currently sitting at 4.4 stars with 7 ratings, all of which are from people I don't know (the guys listed as friends added me after reading the novel). Here's a couple of extracts from reviews:

"you can't imagine how much I loved this book"

"Getting Lucky has a very publishable quality to it, and I could see the piece as featured fiction in any quality magazine."

It is still available as a free PDF. I'd love to hear what other people think.

Kindle version is now free in several territories (US, Canada, waiting confirmation regarding the UK).

Now up to 18 ratings with a 4.1 average.

"I really enjoyed this short book. It was hard to put it down. I planned to only read a few pages and, before I knew it, I was on the last page."