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message 1: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) Yeah... Hi.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi:)


message 3: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) What do ya wanna do?


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Um... U wanna do romance? Like supernaturals?


message 5: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) Paranormal Romance? Sure. Can I be the boy?


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay I'll be the girl then:)


message 7: by Flora (last edited May 16, 2013 10:27PM) (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) Sure. Let's make our charrie! We shall come up with the plot along the way. Oh, and if you have a plan, I will go along with it. I don't mind! :P

So here we go!

Name: Zeke
Age: 18
Appearance:

Personality: He's kind and rather sweet. To be role-played. (Opposites in personality are always better...) He's sarcastic and can be ignorant or blatant at times. To be role-played...


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

(Ross Lynch I see....nice)

Name: Danielle Taylor
Age: 17
Appearance: http://wall.alphacoders.com/big.php?i...
Personality: Shes cute, adorable, funny, kind-hearted, and can't ever be mean when she wants to be.


message 9: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Yes. You know him? I would have chosen anime tho... So, the storyline. What do ya wanna do? Any ideas? I hope you do... Wait, and we're doing paranormal romance... You wanna be the paranormal being...?)


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

(Yes sure, I guess I'll be a vampire....)


message 11: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (I'm gonna start.)

Zeke rocked his chair backward as he swirled his glass, watching the red liquid in it swirl. The gyrating bodies in the club continued rocking to the music and people making out behind him. It was a Saturday and it was a time to chill out and relaxed himself.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani sat at a table by herself, she looked around. She came here with friends but she lost them all.


message 13: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (You're detailed?)

Zeke might as well be drunk and start dancing with random girls. He got off his chair, his boots clomped onto the floor and would have created a loud noise if the music hadn't been cranked to the highest. He staggered, his vision was edged with black. He almost lost his balance if he hadn't caught hold of a table beside him. He bent over, trying to gain his balance.

When he looked up, he saw a red haired girl looking at him, with a somewhat concerned glint in her black eyes or that's what it appeared to be.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

(What do u mean?)

Dani looked at the guy. "You okay there?" She asked, knowing he was drunk. She shouldn't have spoken up....too late now.


message 15: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Um, like you write more than I?)

'I'm perfectly fine.' Zeke murmured, his voice slurred. He didn't try to hide it. His mind was swarming with stars and he tried to retain his balance though without much success.

(Don't particularly have any plot in line... Umm, help?)


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

(Um...I can't think of a plot for paranormal romance...)

Dani murmured something and sighed. "Do you need any help? Or are you good on your own?" She asked, not looking at him. She just wanted to go home but she didnt have a car with her or any keys.


message 17: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Shall we change then? To realistic romance?)


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

(Sure since its easier)


message 19: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Have any plot in mind?)


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

(Wanna do high school romance? Like he's the jock/bully/cheater of the school and he happens to like the shy/quiet/smart girl and she hates his guts and he has to prove to her that he won't hurt her or anything... That's all I got)


message 21: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Sure, bully kind? Then, they fell in love?)


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

(Yeah)


message 23: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Let's use the same charrie. But you wanna start off?)


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

(Okay)

Dani walked into school, trying to escape the crowded hallways but got stuck on the way. She finally made it to her locker and opened it, putting her stuff in. She closed her locker and waited for the crowd to die down.


message 25: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) Zeke was sweaty, his shirt clung to his back with sweat. His face must have looked damped as sweat trickled down the side of his face. He wiped them with the back of his hand, drying his hand onto his shirt. He didn't care about manners. They had just had their physical education, and a game of baseball.

He spotted from a few lockers away the red haired girl who was a lot shorter than him. He smiled then and shared a look with Shaun, his best friend and buddy. They smiled, not one exactly of warmth but diabolical. Shaun gave his shoulder a playful punch and he nodded.

He made his way over, weaving his tall lanky figure past the crowd of students who eyed him with somewhat fear.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani was looking at the ground, not noticing anyone. She she sighed and looked thru her homework and books. Okay she finished them all. Dani glanced up and saw someone walking towards her, no, no one would wanna be with her. She's a nobody. Once she convinced herself the guy wouldn't be going towards her, she looked back at the ground.


message 27: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) Zeke looked down at her and peered over her shoulder. It was a History book. Boring. Could anything get more interesting? Of course not, he thought wryly to himself.

When he saw the girl looked up, black eyes widening and seemed surprised at him. He smiled, a smile that held derision and lack warmth.

'Hello. Say what are you doing here all alone?' Zeke made sure to put as much contempt and disdain in that last word, to emphasize the fact that she was an outcast in this school. Nobody would want to befriend her.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani mentally face palmed herself, she didnt want anyone to talk to her. She didnt reply to him. How he said alone made her sad enough. She kept her gaze on the ground.


message 29: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Your title answered my title.)

'What's with you and the ground? Don't you know who I am?' Zeke snarled angrily.

He wasn't much of a patient boy and had always got what he wanted, being much like a hypocrite. (Dani can teach him manners and how to be a gentleman.)


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

(Title? And okay)

Dani looked up at him, "Yeah I know who you are, what does it matter?" She couldn't believe she just said that. She remained quiet after she said that. Dani wanted to get out of here, Can someone at least help me? She thought.


message 31: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Ya. Brighten your character? I'm at loss. Help me plz.)

Zeke frowned and raised his eyebrow. 'Look, I ain't here to just say hi to you. It's not that I'm friendly whatsoever. But I have a deal.'


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

(Like make her more detailed?)

Dani was playing with a strand of her red hair. "What deal?" Dank asked, interested in what he said for once. She looked up and met his eyes, waiting for his answer.


message 33: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (No. More reactions. More like you said her personality was... You said she was bubbly? I implied that. Then, make her that! Make her live! Like your best friend.)

Zeke smiled then, glad that he finally got her attention though it wasn't fully. He felt triumphed and felt sinew for a split second. 'You have your History book?' Zeke asked and couldn't help smirking as the girl looked at him quizzically. He snatched the book in her arm away and spun on his heels.

'Now you don't!' he called out and ran down the hallway. Shaun slapped his back as they ran from where Shaun had hidden just now. They laughed and went to their next class, Zeke laughing as he flipped at the pages of the boring History book.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

(Oh okay! I'm just having her not talk much cuz she doesn't trust him)

Dani tried to chase them for her history book but never caught up, "Ugh...I seriously hate boys now." She said. Dani watched them leave and decided to skip first period since her teacher wouldn't leave her alone if she didnt have her book. She sat down against a wall and tried to hide herself from teachers when some do come.


message 35: by Flora (last edited Oct 13, 2013 07:24AM) (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Oh uh it's okay. Do it your way. I just find that if she's quiet and conserved, it's difficult for me to RP her. Sorry. I'm sometimes a bit over reacting.)

The bell rang and Zeke didn't even hear it. He was just slacking and sleeping in class and Shaun had laughed, shoving him as he blinked at the seemingly bright lights of the classroom. His classmates had walked past them, chattering and packing their big pile of homework into their bags.

'Sleeping as usual?' Shaun teased, hooking himself onto the table as Zeke wiped his mouth free of his drool with the back of his hand. He gathered the papers scattered everywhere on his desk and stashed them into his bag, not really caring if the papers were creased or not.

Zeke had always hated studying or doing homework. Despite that, the irony was that he still scored too 30 the highest in the whole school. He wasn't exactly hardworking. Maybe just his smarts, he shrugged as Shaun took the History book he had taken from the red haired girl in the hall before.

'See anything interesting? I don't think I can survive school for the rest of the day.' Zeke mumbled as he slung his backpack on his shoulder and ran his fingers through his hair. The sweat was gone from his hair, though there was still a lingering trace of sweat on him.

Shaun jumped down from the table and his backpack bumped his back hardly and mercilessly which Zeke eyed with a cocked head, an inquiring look in his eyes. 'Nothing much. Just wondering what deal you want to have with that red head.' Shaun said, his voice was lower than his.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

(Oh...I'll try. And wow ur such a detailed person. I can't ever be like that it's so hard...but I like how ur so detailed)

Dani heard the bell ring and got up from her hiding spot. "Skipping class...that's different from all the other times." Dani said to herself. She walked to her next class and saw Zeke and his friend. She rolled her eyes.


message 37: by Flora (last edited May 24, 2013 07:15AM) (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (Always online? I'm using phone. Do mine >_> mind the typo error. Stupid auto correct. I told ya I'm detailed. You didn't know what I was talking about. O_____O)

Zeke didn't know it either. He was just stalling his reply and slumping in his walk towards the door of the classroom from his seat which was somewhere behind. (I'm listening to music. So can't concentrate. Sorry.) He didn't know what deal really to make with that girl. He just found her easy to tease.

When he was five years old, he was always bullied by the older kids who play at the playground. He was always pushed and shoved around because he was smaller in size and age. He was always like a casualty when he reached home. He cut his lips once and he had been aggravated and had started a fight. He was obviously no match for the bigger stronger kids and had cracked and broke his knee and head badly.

His brother and mom had to come to the playground and bring him home. He had to have himself bandaged for more than a week which wasn't a pleasant experience. Maybe his past has triggered him to bully others now.

Zeke now shrugged off those memories when he saw the red haired girl at the corner of the door they were almost out. Turning his head slightly to Shaun, such that the girl was still in his peripheral vision, he said purposefully, 'I know what the deal would be. We would burn it if she doesn't help us do our History homework. How's that on for size?' Zeke called out loudly such that the girl could hear him.

He had always hated History and he knew Shaun shared the same detest as him. This would be a good chance and to show the girl who was more powerful.


message 38: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 26, 2013 02:02PM) (new)

Dani's eyes widen, "What!? Don't burn it!" Dani said. She couldn't have her History book burned but she certainly wouldn't help those jerks.


message 39: by Flora (last edited May 24, 2013 07:06AM) (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (You read fast. How?)

Shaun widened his eyes and stalked out of the class with two long strides and had the girl cornered. 'What are you doing here? This is strictly the senior area. No juniors are allowed.'

Zeke was smug and couldn't feel more better than this. The feeling of something bursting. The pleasure and happiness. The look of abhorred horror on that girl's face. He bit back his urge to do a jig.

Rolling his eyes at Shaun's protectiveness over the senior's classroom area, he stalked to his side and laid a hand on his shoulder. 'Shaun. Let her be.' He paused and gave the girl's face a quick glance, the straight of her nose and the pretty black eyes the girl has, framed with her long eyelashes. She was actually pretty with her dark red hair framing her oval face. He smirked and let the feeling washed over him quickly.

'Then we shall carry out the plan. Homework for book. What do ya say? Deal? Of course.' Zeke laughed, a short laugh and jerked Shaun after him. 'Let's go. 17 Dove Street, the area near the forest. At 8pm.' Zeke said, flinging the words back at the girl as they walked down the hallway.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

(Idk....I guess I like reading so I just skim thru the passage it's not that hard to read fast)

Dani was terrified. Why did it have to be her? Always her, everyone always picked on her, maybe because she was so vulnerable or because she was an easy target. Either way she hated it. Dani felt some tears fall.


message 41: by Flora (last edited May 24, 2013 07:14AM) (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (... I like savoring in words. -____-)

Shaun saw the tears as he looked back as Zeke dragged him down the hall. Turning back reluctantly, Shaun glanced at his friend's face, a handsome face with his blonde hair curling at his temples. He would look better if there wasn't a mischievous glint in those eyes. There was something evil about his doings. He frowned to himself.

When they were out of the classroom blocks and in the staircase area, Shaun yanked his arm away from Zeke. He glared at him and asked quietly, feeling his cold anger rolling off his words. 'Why did you have to do that? She's a girl. Not a punching bag for you to pick on.'

Zeke was looking at the bannister and seemed to find that extremely fascinating at that time.

'Zeke,' Shaun called his name again sharply.

'I want to, can't I? She can finish our homework for us and save us the trouble. Seriously? Have a break, Shaun.' Zeke snapped back, his dark blue eyes snapping at the other's green ones.

Shaun sighed. 'I guess. But she's really small and weak. You think it's alright?'
Zeke shot him a have-you-lost-your-mind-bro look. Shaun would have loved to debate but the defensiveness and a look he couldn't quite decipher made him gave in. Was it fear in those dark blue orbs? Shaun wondered, if so why would it be there? What was Zeke fearful about? He shrugged those questions to the back of his mind as they went to their respective classes.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

(Oh...well I read fast cuz I don't want people to wait on me to reply...)

Dani bit her lip and left the class. She ignored everyone and went outside. She found herself behind the school after she stopped walking. Dani sat down and started crying.


message 43: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (I don't mind. But that's good. Saves time. Ummm, how am I suppose to write? I want a love triangle and am building it... -____- Ya.)

Shaun joked with some girls and flirted with them. 'So I was like ya, what do you say? You're just an idiot pretending to know.' Mary smiled, waving her hand, emphasizing her point.

Shaun smiled and nodded at her. He was going to meet up with Zeke later. He saw the red haired girl sitting at the corner of the school compound, her back against the wall. He frowned and excused himself.

Guilt of what Zeke did washed over him. He wasn't always very pleased and satisfied with what Zeke do to others. He thought maybe he could help the girl slightly.

'Hi,' Shaun said, looking down at the girl.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

(Love triangle....nice...ur really good at this)

Dani wiped her tears that fell and looked up. What does he want now? She thought. She didnt remember his name but all she knew was that he helped Zeke take her book. "What do you want from me?" She asked.


message 45: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (I am? I take that as a compliment.)

'Crying over how to do our work? It's easy. Just about Napolean and his rules. And the Soviet Union. Nah, nothing more.' Shaun mused, smiling, not a smile that was too unpleasant.


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

(but it's true I would've never thought of that....)

"I'm not crying over that." Dani snapped. She didnt know why he was even talking to her. She avoided his gaze and looked somewhere else. "And I know how to do your homework..." She murmured, it actually wasnt that hard, if they were to think and use their brains then it would be really easy.


message 47: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (... Um. Hi?)

'There is something hard about finding and making friends then?' Shaun asked, squatting down beside the girl. His voice was now deprived of the amusement but solemn.

Her face was turned away from him and he didn't mind. He just wanted to know about this girl, to find out more about her. He didn't know but suddenly, seeing her tears and sorrow. It seemed to melt his heart and he just want to comfort her. Wipe those tears away and let them disappear from her pretty angelic face.


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

(Hi....)

Dani sighed, "Partially..." She replied, looking at her feet. Why was he being nice now? That was her question, she thought he would be mean like Zeke but surprisingly he's not.


message 49: by Flora (new)

Flora  (shipitlikefedex) (How's your day?)

Shaun laughed then, a short but not exactly a laugh filled with animosity. 'Don't make a decision that I'm not mean. I might be, later on. The name's Shaun. Yours?'

He stretched out his hand, raising his eyebrow slightly, as if daring the girl to shake his hand. He didn't want to expose the fact that his sympathy always got the better of him to her. He didn't want her to tell Zeke that he was a soft-hearted guy. No, that would make him lose his face. He had to add tough and blatant.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

(It's going great urs?)

"Dani." She replied shortly, finally looking at him. "Don't you have to go meet up with Zeke or something?" She asked, not taking his hand.


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