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Have fun! This poem will be about the earth and other nature-y elements!

Like a bud you bloom/into what is a surprise/listen, watch, and see

This is a hakui by me:)

Flowers, flowing, falling
Falling from the sky
Soft, crying, calling
They whisper
'Will we die?'
Petals, pink, and blue
Crumple on the grass
The flowers... They have died
Finally, at last

Stupid poem by me :P i suck at poetry btw. haha

I'll enter...

Heey! Maria's friend again! She said I can do whatever again! Man I love this writing group!
So here's my poem! It's about how I felt when I looked at someones instagram (not mentioning whos)!
Hope you like it:

When I look at his photos
I see things that I never saw before
Even though they were right in front of me
A flame glowing on a candle,
Simple but he made it beautiful
A room with sunlight shining through the windows,
Simple but he made it beautiful
A mushroom growing in the morning grass,
Simple but he made it beautiful
So when I look at his photos
It seems like he's pointing out the unseen for me to see.
And that's why I love it.

Black,
It's all black.
A set of stairs,
A glowing angel.
No,
A halo is not upon this creatures head.
Horns,
Poking through.
A tail,
Positively forked.
Hell awaits,
For me.
Why didn't I help,
Before now?

how is that about nature?

(btw- it's still really good <3))

oh sorry I really didn't read the thing about nature but thanks.

I just kind of read that it was a poem contest and wrote a poem I can do another one about nature

:) np i'm not the judge, so i shouldn't be talking

Angel wrote: "Flowers, flowing, falling
Falling from the sky
Soft, crying, calling
They whisper
'Will we die?'
Petals, pink, and blue
Crumple on the grass
The flowers... They have died
Finally, at last

Stupid ..."

It's beautiful : )

ya it is

Aww :) thanks you guys!

Angel wrote: "Aww :) thanks you guys!"

: )

:) you should write one!! you're really good!!

Should I do one that's actually about nature?

yeah

Leaves falling,
Trees whispering a solemn good bye.
Crying for their loss,
Their hideous change shaming them.
From colorful and lovely,
To bare.
Seasons forcing them,
To freeze once again.
Their refuge will come,
With the warmth of spring.

Who's judging?

Idk...

Okay

Probably Hannah she started it

And meiyu according to her comment

Meeyu and I are judging together. Keep the poems going! The are fantastic!

Okay cool. What time is the cutoff?

I didn't mean to enter twice if we weren't supposed to. My first poem just wasn't about nature.

Who won??

?? idk.

Meiyu come judge!

Lol!

she probably won't come just don't tell her you did it without her

Y does Hannah have to be here? I thought u were judging...

yeah but can't you just do it now?

It's just, my dad is kicking me off m laptop and i kinda wanna see who won. I'm really competitive XD

Oh, i didn't kno she was a mod >.<

how do you have two mods? I started this thing with Clara and we're both supposed to be mods but I don't know how to make myself one

Clara

okay thanks

How come Clara isn't a MOD then??

OH, ok nmv. So... Winner??

oh yeah is your middle name Rose?

Me?

yeah sure anyone really I'm just trying to find people for my group

he's so cute...

thanks Cheyenne's was really good though

Chloe Rose wrote: "yeah sure anyone really I'm just trying to find people for my group"

Nope... Sorry. lol

lol!

I'm sorry.... :'(

That's fine! I understand!




As for the contestants, I am terribly sorry. Meeiyu was being incredibly considerate and letting me help her judge. I fell alseep on my couch and she patiently waited for me. She eventually did it without me (which was good. You shouldn't have to wait.) So yeah. I feel terrible and I am sorry. :'(

That's alright Hannah it's understandable about sleep:)

Congratz Cheyenne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D