Beta Reader Group discussion

Thank you for reading my post. I've written a hot and steamy beachy novel and I'm looking for honest feedback before I publish. Here's my working description:

The small seaside community of Point Pleasant is recovering from the devastating effects of a super storm hurricane. Million dollar beach homes are ripe for the picking, as fearful homeowners flee to find residence in safer inland neighborhoods.

Evan McGuire is desperate for a fresh start. His career in the NFL depends on it. Years of partying and carefree living have caught up with him. After buying a beach house in need of renovations, he begins to rebuild his life and his reputation.

What he doesn’t expect is a chance meeting with Juliette Fletcher, out on an early morning beach run with her dog. A strong mutual attraction draws them together, but fear of scaring her away keeps Evan from revealing his true identity.

Evan finds himself in an unfamiliar situation – forced to work harder than he ever has before to prove himself worthy of her affections. But will Juliette give him a chance to earn her trust and win her heart before it’s too late?

My first chapter can be previewed here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

If you find it worthy of your time, please let me know. All feedback (positive or otherwise) is welcome. Thank you!

id love to beta read it for you. email me at tmabe41@gmail.com

Tonya wrote: "id love to beta read it for you. email me at tmabe41@gmail.com"

Ready to send. What format do you prefer? I can send it in several different ways. I truly appreciate your generous offer of time and insight.

send it to me Pdf if you can...open to read another now. usually a 2 day turnaround with review. ill message you my email.

It sounds great! I'd love to beta read for you as well! Jessica@westover.net

I'd live to read it!
Jessicadavey12@gmail.com

Jessica wrote: "It sounds great! I'd love to beta read for you as well! Jessica@westover.net"

Let me know the format and I'll send it ASAP.

Jessica wrote: "I'd live to read it!
Jessicadavey12@gmail.com"

Let me know the format and I'll send it ASAP.

Suzanne wrote: "Jessica wrote: "It sounds great! I'd love to beta read for you as well! Jessica@westover.net"

Let me know the format and I'll send it ASAP."

Suzanne wrote: "Jessica wrote: "It sounds great! I'd love to beta read for you as well! Jessica@westover.net"

Let me know the format and I'll send it ASAP."

PDF would be great. :)

read it in a day...giving review tommorrow but wanted to say it was excellent! couldn't put it down! what talent this writer has!

Please post your reviews here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I look forward to reading each of them. Of course, the waiting is a very stressful thing, but it's a part of the process. I don't want to give a deadline, I'd prefer you read at your own pace without rush or hurry. Thank you!

I am on chapter 3 and REALLY enjoying it so far. You have a great writing style!

I have great news - I’m nearly ready to release my novel. I wanted everyone who helped me by beta reading, ARC reviewing, and cover design. Without all your important help, I know this wouldn’t be possible. Please help me spread the word by recommending this book to your fellow readers and book bloggers. Fingers crossed!
Running Back to You Official Release Date:
Friday, August 9, 2013
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