CGC (Christian Girls Chat) discussion

I am very happy to present the first chapter to my new book, Like The Stars. I am currently working on it, but plan to be finished by June 30th. After that, I'll just take a few days to edit and then it'll all be up here. Please comment letting me know what you think, but on the story please, not here! Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

If you guys like that (or if you don't) I would love it if you checked out my other writing too. Thank you so much!

thanks!

I added the second and third chapters to Like The Stars. Please give this a quick look and comment on the story letting me know what I can improve! (Please don't comment on this topic) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Ok, so I'm reposting Like The Stars because I'm getting ready to write my next book and I want critiques on this one first so I can incorporate what I learn from LTS into my next book. I want brutal honesty in all the comments. Also, it's completely unedited so don't critique line by line, please; I just want big picture critiques, like comments on what works or doesn't in a character, in a scene, in the plot, things like that. Thank you guys so much! It's much appreciated! (Comments on the story please, not here)

Link: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Aww, I really want to read your story but the links won't work for me. :(

Christal wrote: "Aww, I really want to read your story but the links won't work for me. :("

Aw man, yeah I'm sorry, I took it down a while back. Once I have edited it though, I will be looking around for beta readers so you could still read it!