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The Rise Up Story!!!
She turned to the dog "what's your name?" She asked.
Then, she looked down at an illustration in her book, she was surprised to see it looked exactly like Gabriel.
To say that she was terrified would be a vast understatement as the wind ripped her back, and gravity threatened to suck her off the dragons back.
[I was thinking that, but I didn't wanna have to be the one to name her, lol!!]
The dragon leveled off, flying inches above the treetops of a vast forest.
The dragon leveled off, flying inches above the treetops of a vast forest.
The sun dipped slowly below the tall trees, casting dark shadows all over the clearing while the sky remained a two tone blue and indigo.
"Come," the dragon said, walking slowly towards the waterfall. "We have much to discuss, and this forest may have ears."
Still confused but she followed anyway.
She wasn't sure she wanted to follow the dragon, although she knew that she could not run from it.
The object got brighter and Brielle suddenly awoke, realizing that it was just a dream and that the sun was rising.
She stepped toward her bedroom door, but as she did, it disappeared, and she was back in the cave again, looking at the shining object, then just suddenly as it appeared, it disappeared, and she was back in her room, staring at the door.
(Oooh! I'm glad you have this; I was going to suggest it!)
Suddenly she heard an explosion and two scenes played before her simultaneously; a tremor led the ceiling of the cave to fall and her bedroom to collapse.
Suddenly she heard an explosion and two scenes played before her simultaneously; a tremor led the ceiling of the cave to fall and her bedroom to collapse.




If you'd like to speak outside of the story, please use brackets as I've used here...
I'll start us off with a classic...]
It was a dark and blustery night.