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message 1: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
[This thread is the Rise Up Story!!! Thread *applause*.... It'll work similar to the Word Game Thread... But we'll write a story with each poster, writing one line at a time.

If you'd like to speak outside of the story, please use brackets as I've used here...

I'll start us off with a classic...]

It was a dark and blustery night.


message 2: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments A girl was reading in a meadow.


message 3: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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She was very enthralled in the story.


message 4: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments She turned a page when all of a sudden a dog came and sat by her.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

She turned to the dog "what's your name?" She asked.


message 6: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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It sighed, then settled, laying its head on her lap.


message 7: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments The girl saw a collar on the dog.


message 8: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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It read: Gabriel.


message 9: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments The girl decided that Gabriel must have gotten out of his owner's fence by accident.


message 10: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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She saw no phone number, or address on the tag.


message 11: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments Then, she looked down at an illustration in her book, she was surprised to see it looked exactly like Gabriel.


message 12: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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She looked again at the girl in the book, seeing a sudden resemblance to herself.


message 13: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments So she thought, hmm this is really strange.


message 14: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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The dull heat of dread started spreading through her stomach and chest.


message 15: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments She heard her mom call her in for dinner, but she wasn't feeling all that hungry.


message 16: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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And she wasn't feeling like leaving the meadow either.


message 17: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments So she ignored her mother and put her book down, and lay down to take a nap in the meadow.


message 18: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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As the dog settled next her, an idea struck her like: The book! What happens next?


message 19: by Sierra (new)

Sierra (skippingstones4) | 179 comments She quickly sat back up and opened the book, searching through it's pages for what came next.


message 20: by brooke1994 (last edited Jul 03, 2013 10:47AM) (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments A purple dragon came riding out of the pages.


message 21: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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What the- Her thought was cut short by an ear splitting roar.


message 22: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments She tried to tell the dragon to calm down, but it didn't, it put her on it's back :O


message 23: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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To say that she was terrified would be a vast understatement as the wind ripped her back, and gravity threatened to suck her off the dragons back.


message 24: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments The dragon was flying faster and faster.


message 25: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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"Hold on tight," it said, then dove for the ground at breakneck speed.


message 26: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments {Lol!} So she held on with all of her might. {Wait, shouldn't the girl have a name?}


message 27: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
[I was thinking that, but I didn't wanna have to be the one to name her, lol!!]

The dragon leveled off, flying inches above the treetops of a vast forest.


message 28: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments He asked, "Where do you want to go?"


message 29: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
She tried to catch her breath, gasping and heaving.

"What's your name?" the dragon said.

[Hah!]


message 30: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments I'm Brielle {Hee hee} the girl answered.


message 31: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
[Sky Sailing, nice!]

"Brielle," the dragon said as if trying a new food. "Nice name."


message 32: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments "Thanks," she answered.


message 33: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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The dragon grunted, then dove into a clearing, landing lightly on the ground.


message 34: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments Brielle got off and looked at the scenery around her.


message 35: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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The sun dipped slowly below the tall trees, casting dark shadows all over the clearing while the sky remained a two tone blue and indigo.


message 36: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments She saw a stone pathway and a waterfall.


message 37: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
"Come," the dragon said, walking slowly towards the waterfall. "We have much to discuss, and this forest may have ears."


message 38: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments "Well, ok" Brielle said.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Still confused but she followed anyway.


message 40: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
She wasn't sure she wanted to follow the dragon, although she knew that she could not run from it.


message 41: by Sierra (new)

Sierra (skippingstones4) | 179 comments The dragon led her to a big cave hidden behind the waterfall.


message 42: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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She tried to shake herself dry, earning a hearty chuckle from the dragon.


message 43: by Sierra (new)

Sierra (skippingstones4) | 179 comments The dragon moved a boulder aside, revealing a glowing object.


message 44: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
Brielle reached out toward it, then snapped her hand back. This is all happening too fast!


message 45: by Sierra (new)

Sierra (skippingstones4) | 179 comments The object got brighter and Brielle suddenly awoke, realizing that it was just a dream and that the sun was rising.


message 46: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

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She took a few breaths, and rolled grudgingly out of her bed.


message 47: by brooke1994 (new)

brooke1994  (formerlynarnian525) | 2099 comments She could smell bacon cooking.


message 48: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
She stepped toward her bedroom door, but as she did, it disappeared, and she was back in the cave again, looking at the shining object, then just suddenly as it appeared, it disappeared, and she was back in her room, staring at the door.


message 49: by Dee, YOU'RE A MOD!! (new)

Dee | 2703 comments Mod
(Oooh! I'm glad you have this; I was going to suggest it!)

Suddenly she heard an explosion and two scenes played before her simultaneously; a tremor led the ceiling of the cave to fall and her bedroom to collapse.


message 50: by Mojoboy31, Kitchen Ninja (new)

Mojoboy31 | 3210 comments Mod
Oh, crap! she thought.


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