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message 1: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Lacee brought the idea for this one. Post the best horror story you can come up with in two sentences.

Nate furnished an example: “The floor boards creaked from behind me. Slowly I turned, the skin had literally been stripped from her face exposing bones, muscle tissue and veins.”


message 2: by Jocelyn (new)

Jocelyn (joc113) The floor bucked and heaved. When it stopped, my mother stood in front of me.


message 3: by Elita (new)

Elita The creep was still standing by the bus stop the next day. Even after running him over twice yesterday, that guy was still there.


message 4: by Nate (new)

Nate  | 166 comments Blood dripped from the edge of the knife, he was practically gutted. Yet, there he stood, alive, and with a vengeful look in his eyes.


SleeplessBookExplorer (laceebookexplorer) This is from the feed I got it from, read these:

http://www.reddit.com/r/AskReddit/com...


message 6: by Emily (new)

Emily My dog's eyes began to fill with blood. I cradled him in my arms, sorrow anchored by the firm knowledge that I was next.


message 7: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Okay, I can take no credit for this since I did not write it, Fredric Brown did, but I thought it was fitting for this thread.


"The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door...."


message 8: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I thought that I would be safe if I could just wake up from this nightmare. But then, I did wake up.


message 9: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments When I awakened, I found myself in pitch blackness, in a confining space lined with a satin-like material. I had hardly room to move, and the air was getting hard to breathe.


message 10: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Jul 28, 2013 12:02PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4489 comments I was not completely alone in the forest as I heard the brushing sound of someone stalking me, treading through the grass. I fell down and as the man's tall shadow loomed over me, I realized it was too late to scream.


message 11: by M (last edited Jul 29, 2013 12:46PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments It wasn’t with my own eyes but with the eyes of a sixth sense that I saw my brains splattered on the warehouse wall behind me after the double-barreled shotgun Bruno had stuck in my face coughed enough lead to drop several geese. I wondered if Vondine was warming up the meatloaf and noodles left over from lunch.


message 12: by Elita (new)

Elita For a city kid to hear someone walking behind you on a late evening is pretty much a daily occurrence. Though when that person breaks into a run you usually want to start running yourself.


message 13: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Alex! I see you’ve reposted one of my favorites of your profile pics.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

He held his breath until the sound of footsteps faded. When he opened his eyes, the warm breath on his neck told him that he was not alone.


message 15: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The way he had died wasn’t the way he would have wanted to. And this certainly wasn’t the way--he thought to himself as he looked in a mirror--he would have wanted to come back from the grave.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Many believed that he died that day. He did but he had two compelling reasons to come back - to seek revenge and to take the girl he loved with him.


message 17: by Kyra (new)

Kyra (Nikara) | 1221 comments Kyra screamed as her sister forced her into the ruffly pink dress. Then blanched when she held up hair ribbons and mascara...


message 18: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She couldn’t have said why she was afraid he would return from the grave, any more than her mother could have explained, in the forum of the beauty shop, why her daughter went to sleep at night with a sawed-off shotgun.


message 19: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 30, 2013 05:35AM) (new)

M, I really find this funny. Sorry..


message 20: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments It’s supposed to be! Thank you, Leslie.


message 21: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "The way he had died wasn’t the way he would have wanted to. And this certainly wasn’t the way--he thought to himself as he looked in a mirror--he would have wanted to come back from the grave."

Very funny! Love it. LOL!


message 22: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Kyra wrote: "Kyra screamed as her sister forced her into the ruffly pink dress. Then blanched when she held up hair ribbons and mascara..."

Kyra, this is a great opening. Have you got an awkward story coming up with this?

Great fun read, everyone this morning. Still laughing!


message 23: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy!


message 24: by Jocelyn (new)

Jocelyn (joc113) Nice, M.

LOL, Kyra.


message 25: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He didn’t believe in zombies until, in a room dimly-lit by what a skylight let in of evening, he saw one approaching, its clothes torn, the skin rotting off its face. Recoiling instinctively, he watched as the zombie did the same thing, and it was then that he noticed the bench, the long mirror’s fasteners, in the littered space that had once been a department store’s breakroom.


message 26: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4489 comments He was barely conscious when he felt himself hunched over uncomfortably, in terrible darkness. It was not until it dawned on him and ran out of air that he was in a large barrel- deep in the basement amongst the mad wineman's vast collection of booze and "new mixes."


message 27: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4489 comments It's funny when I started the story I was about to type "He was barley" and then realized Yeah that's true. He kinda was.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

It was already midnight when he decided to take a break from writing a story. He was about to turn off his computer when someone whispered in his ear, "Write about what you've done to me."


message 29: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL! These are fun. Leslie, particularly fine. Do you have a story to go along with this?


He liked to pretend that he wasn't afraid of the midnight hour. But what he didn't pretend to be afraid of was why his memory was blank every night's midnight hour.


message 30: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2013 11:55PM) (new)

I don't have. I'm just trying to scare those who like to stay awake until midnight, just kidding :))


message 31: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments No one would have believed him if he had explained why he was standing in an old cemetery in the middle of the night, a shovel in his hand, numb with the terror of what he knew he must find.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

The air had turned cold and stale as the hours dragged by, he held the shovel tight, like his life depended on it. A forceful wind pushed him to the ground and when he looked up, his scream tore the quiet night.


message 33: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Years later, he still woke yelling in the night, and felt a prickling of the scalp on such rare occasions as he could be coaxed into recounting what had happened to him. He wasn’t sure what had terrified him the most, the feeling of being pulled into a collapsing grave, or the sensation of what had him by the ankles.


message 34: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The blackness of the night slowly thickened and the stars slowly disappeared. The lack of light became a tasteless treacle that entered his lungs and oozed into his blood until he became the darkness.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

She carried the last box into the house, feeling excited to finally have a place she could call her own. As she was arranging her things inside a closet, she found a voodoo doll on the top shelf, in her own image.


message 36: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4489 comments She knew that the evil man in black in front of her would make his prisoners and her go through torture and pain. Then her fears were answered as the man called her name and all her fellow students' eyes turned to her, burning into her psyche.


message 37: by Melanie (new)

Melanie (melanienmo) | 34 comments She said that she wanted to die. And die she did.


message 38: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She was reincarnated as a poodle. It might not have turned out badly if the poodle had been bought by someone other than a niece she had detested.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

That's funny, M! :P


message 40: by inactive account (new)

inactive account (inactiveaccoun) | 48 comments The boy ran and ran but his sister caught up and dragged him to her room. She puts him in a dress and puts on make up ,then she puts head phones in his ears and justin beiber songs play.....


message 41: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4489 comments Thegotenza wrote: "The boy ran and ran but his sister caught up and dragged him to her room. She puts him in a dress and puts on make up ,then she puts head phones in his ears and justin beiber songs play....."

Oh no. The horror!


message 42: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Though he found himself in hell, shoveling coal, after stepping off a curb and into the path of a hearse on its way to be serviced, he managed to stave off despair for awhile. Then his mother-in-law showed up.


message 43: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 02, 2013 04:40PM) (new)

"It's nice to see you again," his mother-in-law said, lowering her raspy voice into a whisper. He froze, feeling rooted to the spot as he watched her eyes turn to Red.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

The obese beggars awoke in the filthy shadow of a dumpster in a downtown alley. A woman's red shawl lay at their feet and several fingers that had been severed most assuredly from a hand.


message 45: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The worst thing wasn’t that, when the catering service delivered the finger food he had ordered for the reception, he found fingers in it. The worst thing was that he knew whose fingers they were.


message 46: by Guy (last edited Nov 01, 2013 06:35AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [[LOL, M! Leslie, slight English grammatical thing for you. It's been a while I hope you are still open to minor corrections - '... turn into red' does not require the 'into' if the eyes are becoming 'red' in colour. And 'red' would need to be capitalized if you mean 'Red' as in 'Red Riding Hood'. I am not sure of the 'proper' grammatical words to describe it, but the into requires that the following word be an object (I believe) and not an adjective. M will have a better way of saying that, and will be able to correct me.]]

'You aren't going to believe this,' the server said to the chef, 'but a customer gave me your husband's finger.' 'Wasn't that rude of them?' was all she said.


message 47: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 01, 2013 03:18PM) (new)

Yay, thank you Guy! Yes, I'm always open for corrections :)

P.S. Don't worry, I got your explanation. I've been using into the wrong way, yikes!


message 48: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments :-)


message 49: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments There came from the door a loud knock. Normally, this would be okay, but that door was no longer there and had not been there for more than three decades.


message 50: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She screamed as what came in the door was a slavering monster looking for dinner. The next morning, when Arthur shuddered in revulsion as he read the grizzly account in the newspaper, at the same time he found himself hoping that whatever had left only the bones and one arm of his ex-wife had found her more to its taste than Arthur had.


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