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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

How do you kill off a character? whether it is a main character or a not so main character. Does it emotionally hurt you as an author to kill a character? Do you do it often?


message 2: by Gabriel (new)

Gabriel Argonne (gabrielargonne) | 2 comments Maybe this should be directed at Mr. George R. R. Martin, as he is the expert in this field....

On a more serious note, it SHOULD be painful and difficult to kill a character that you have seen grown and cultivated throughout your work. If it isn't difficult then you haven't done your job correctly.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Lol yes, he is the master of it.


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Oh this one is very difficult... sorry Jackie. I won't say who it is but it is someone very important. And it is very, very sad. I have been working on the same chapter for a week now because it is just too fricken awful to write. And the author of game of thrones... I haven't read that yet although I have been meaning to. I saw the tv series. A little erotica but very sad.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Oh yeah, that series is crazy. Don't get attached to any characters, they aren't safe. And, NO,NO,NO are you killing someone I love????


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Unfortunately... Someone I love too. And there are two more people that we love who would probably be better off as dead.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments I think I know who it is. So sad, so sad


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Really? Who? Add the little spoiler things. I might answer and I might not


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

nope. He's one of those as good as dead ones and that made me sadder then the person I killed :'(


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Okay, I'm glad you didn't kill him. I can't wait to see who it is. Is that wrong? lol I'm excited to see who died...


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol. No I don't think so. It is very sad though. It has been holding up the first draft though for a very long time


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Wow, I don't think I would be able to kill any of my characters.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments I think I would cry the entire time. lol


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

I rarely.. well pretty much never cry when reading or watching something sad but this came close. Probably because I am so attached to this character. I know everything about them and I killed them in a very sad and heart-breaking way


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Books are my down fall, I get attached, and then they die, or something bad happens to them. I don't think I have ever cried over a movie, I think books only.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Books are so much easier to get attached to because you are actually reading the emotions instead of seeing someone try to replicate them. It is the original thing instead of a replication/ copy


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Yeah, and I read a lot of romance books, and they just make it worse. lol


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

They have a tendency to do that. :P


message 21: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
This is an interesting topic as I am trying to figure out how to kill off a character in a book that will be a spin off of The Falling series.

Not so much 'trying' as in emotionally, but the HOW I'm going to do it.

Do you do a lot of research when you're deciding to kill a character off?

Shay, I really need to read your books so I can understand what you and Jackie are talking about. ;)


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments You should, they are really good! She writes paranormal.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

I usually just wander away from the book and do other things, write other books, work on other projects, until I am eventually forced to come back and kill them due to deadlines.
It is emotionally very distressing for the author to kill of their own character.


message 24: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
I'm not usually into paranormal, but I am putting The Rift on my TBR list :)


message 25: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
I'm going to have to do research on the disease, if that's what I choose to use, before I start writing. I can imagine its going to be difficult. I'm not too emotionally connected to this particular character as yet, but once I start writing I'm sure I will be.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Well hopefully you like it. It's fairly different from most paranormal and most YA. Ask Jackie :) Her view is probably a lot more unbiased than mine.
And if it is a disease you probably will have to research it.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments I actually think it's more towards the horror genre.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, probably. I had a reader be unable to finish it because it was too creepy and she was expecting something similar to Fallen.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments LOL, that is nowhere near that. The following series is more like a romance


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Fallen is definitely Paranormal Romance. Mine is a lot more focused on what I like to call the "creep factor". There was a side story of romance but it wasn't mainly focused on that


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Yep, two totally different books


message 32: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
Oh well in that case that sounds right up my alley! I love CREEP FACTOR!


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Me too :) It is the best kind of factor.
Think demons and asylums... with demons


message 34: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
I'm going to go check it out :)


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Now you know what me and Jackie are talking about XD!


message 36: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
I didn't find it too creepy at all. This could be because fantasy doesn't creep me out, because its fantasy

I wouldn't classify your book as horror. But that's just my opinion. I can't even figure out how to classify my own books.

When you talk above about killing a character off, is it a character from The Rift or The Deceived?

I'm thinking maybe Jesse...

I'm on narcotic so if any of this doesn't sense, that's why.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. Maybe. I think it creeped people out who were expecting something like Fallen.
This character is in both books but it isn't Jesse. He does end up as good as dead but it isn't him


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments I'm so excited to read it to see who!


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

It probably falls under the psychologically weird category. And I'm working on it. I may just be drawing it out since it's the last book in the series or because of the school work


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Take your time :-)


message 41: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
I had a hard time with my last book in The Falling series. It's almost like losing good friends. I started a spin-off a few days ago, only 26 pages, and that has helped a bit. But, yeah, I think I drug it out too. Too hard to say goodbye.

Hmmm now I'm curious.

Who's the author of Fallen? I might have that book.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Lauren Kate is the author. It was eh. I think the angel part was what kept me reading.
It is so hard to part with them. I am considering spin offs just to keep them a part of my writing.


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments That would be cool :-) I like the falling series, it is kind of good.


message 44: by Marisa (new)

Marisa Oldham (marisaoldham) | 554 comments Mod
My Falling series or Fallen is a series? LOL


Jackie - Fire & Ice Book Reviews (jackiefireicebookreviews) | 0 comments Loren Kate's falling series. Although I love your books too


message 46: by Camryn (new)

Camryn Noble | 27 comments In my writing, I had killed off a character a while ago. He was a side character, but not a crucial one at the time. Now as I develop the other characters more, the one I killed off is more relevant. I didn't have a chance to develop his character when he was still "alive", so it made me miss him after I killed him off. Although, it ended up being crucial to the plot line.
When killing off a character, you typically want to stay away from main characters and sometimes even strong side characters. It'll make your reader upset and likely rate it lower. But if not killing off a character will disrupt the storyline, keep it the way it is. And yes, it's normal to be sad after you kill them off. Good luck with your writing!


message 47: by Scott (new)

Scott Skipper | 13 comments One needs to consider genre. I write historical fiction, so when I've told a character's life story and he reaches the end, what else is going to happen? In my first four novels I've presided over the passing of six main characters (one book covered three generations). In my latest, a political satire, a main character is beaten to death by a mob as a metaphor for the absurdities of modern life that the book lampoons.


message 48: by J.M. (new)

J.M. Rankin (jmrankin) | 41 comments I killed off a main character in my published novel Darkness Forbidden, and found it really hard. They were possibly one of my favourite characters to write so to finally say goodbye was hard and I missed writing them into the sequel but their death was necessary on a number of levels. I agree with Gabriel in that it should hurt when killing off a character as you have invested so much into them. In other books I've written I've even hated saying goodbye to the evil villains!


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