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I have a story in mind, it's about a banshee. I don't know if my Idea is any good so just tell me what you think. So uh... here it is.


Kensia, a girl who just turned eighteen and found out that she wasn't normal like she thought she was and worse she found out that she wasn't even human. She found out that she was a wailing women, otherwise known as a banshee. A girl who screams just before someone dies.

As Kensia uncovers the secrets of her true identity she finds out that she is being hunted, by some kind of coven of sorts. She doesn't know why there after her, but a strange boy who happens to be part of that coven may lead her to the answers to her questions. But can she trust him? He says he wants to help, but is that really what he wants or does he have some dark alternative motive?


I'm not sure if this is any good or if that's exactly how the plots going to be. I kind of just thought of it last night before I went to bed. So please tell me what you think and I'll work from there.

This is a good idea. Maybe give it a little more thought and figure out some details before writing.

This is a really good idea. Try to bring in a good cast of memorable characters into it, not just the girl and the boy. Like who are the important people in the coven?Are they human or something else? Does the girl have any other weird friends? I like that the boy has a suspicious angle to him. Good luck.

☽❣≾Кἆяἆ ☾இ☽ סℯἆด ฬỉฑcჩℯธｾℯԻ≿❣☾ wrote: "I have a story in mind, it's about a banshee. I don't know if my Idea is any good so just tell me what you think. So uh... here it is.


Kensia, a girl who just turned eighteen and found out that s..."

This is a clean, basic idea that is a good start. In fact, it's really good. Now you can be on your way into developing this, by adding more characters, and distincting the motives of the evil 'clan'. Once you have a clear visual of that, you can stretch your plot out.