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Ooooh cool. This is my short little insert called Cravings.



Cravings: an addition to The Land of Shadows
I really did like our “borrowed” vehicle. She was quite the beauty. It was a dark royal green Tesla Model S. How did I know this? It was only the one car I had been dreaming about buying since I turned sixteen. We did borrow it. Actually the dealer gave it to us. But of course only Lilli would have the ability to get him to agree to such a ridicules deal of us only paying ten bucks for one of the top ten cars of 2012. It was the cleanest and most comfortable place we had stayed in ages.
“PULL OVER!!!” Rita yelled. Both Lilli and I sat up. “What’s wrong? Are we under attack?” I said hearing the alarm in my voice. “If there is another blasted creature after us I will blow this planet to smithereens.” Lilli groaned.
“Noooo. I really want McDonalds.” Ri said plainly. “You’re kidding right? You have to be joking.” I almost laughed. “I am not kidding thank very much. I haven’t had a decent meal…” “You’re calling McDonald’s decent?” Lilli snorted loudly. “Shut up. Anyways, I haven’t had a substantial meal in months. I have been dragged across the country; scratch that, the world, along with fighting monsters, gods, titans, giants, and a handful of other fowl beasts. I WANT MCDONALDS.” She glared.
“Couldn’t you wait…” ”No” she gave me a challenging look. It was decided. We were going to McDonalds.
When we pulled up Ri jumped out of the car and waltzed in like she owned the place. By the time Lilli and I had entered she had ordered like ten McDonald’s Happy Meals along with extra fries and drinks. She began to load us up when the cashier started to speak. “Um ma’am, that will be thirty-five ninety-seven.” Ri’s face darkened. I took a few steps backward and warned Lilli to do the same. Sometimes it is wisest to let things play out on their own.
“Sir, you have no idea what I’m capable of. I’ve saved your sorry mortal butt at least ten times from complete human destruction. I have stopped World War 3. I have witnessed things that are a hundred times worse then your nightmares will ever be. Hand over the Happy Meals and no one gets hurt.” She said coldly as she drew her blade of black steal from nowhere. The poor cashier began to tremble.
“Sor-r-r-ry-ry, j-j-just a m-m-m-is-s und-derst-stand-ding.” “I thought so.” She sniffed. “It w-w-w-w-won’t-t hap-pen ag-gainn.” She picked up the rest of the Happy Meals as her face brightened. “Thank you sooooo much.” She smiled widely. “Have a nice evening!” and she skipped right out of the door like a six year old. Yep, that’s Ri for yah.


Hope you liked it.

Round of applause!!!! Yu should write more

You to Ava I read some of the Quest for the golden apple and wow I can actually read it like a real book and I can picture it real real so bravo to that

Wooooo!!!!

Thank you guys. Ava they are right.

Hahahahaha.

Yeah, you should go for it, Ava !

Nikki you still have this ( the story) You know, IDK why, it just makes me feel young when I read this. I remember three/four months ago. When I was three/four months younger.

Yes I knowses.

now I'm three/four months older, oh the good old days when I was young, so young. (LOL XD )

I miss those good old days, yah know what I mean. An entire three/four months is a long long loooooong time.

((Ps I commented in the underworld))

Wait. You're ten???

The internet can be sooooo misleading. I thought you were 13 or 16 or something. You seem that way.

Yes. Yes you are.

In a good, creepy sort of way;)

HA HA HA

Your 10, WOW !!! Your a cool ten-year-old.

Yes. Yes you are.

You welcome.

It's true!!!

If you work on grammar, spelling, and punctuation it would be perfect.

Wow, you made this when you were eight. This is very impressive :)

It's fine. Though it is good.

Yous are ten. Show me what you've written more recently.

Gifted and Talented eh?

Nice. Quite interesting actually.

Hmmmmmmmm.

That's pretty cool, but a little hard to follow. But very impressive, still.

When your older you'll probably be way better at writing, not that your not good now, though. You'll just be better.

Aw, but I do see the potential in it. A little problem here and there. Though, all and all it has a great story. Especially at the end when the girls pulls out all those books, and the other two fall asleep.

Girl, I meant. Sorry fast typing.

No problem, it's true, anyway.

Now I feel like writing :)

Idea! Well I'm going to make a story of my character, Sapphire. Then post it here, and you guys tell me what you think, okay. Get it. Great!

Omg, I'm so sorry for you. I'm glad you looked on the bright side.

You know you can remake her just under a different name if you wish. Though when's the funeral. I don't want to miss it.

Here's my writing of Sapphire. I thought it would be pretty cool to make a story about how she learned she was a Alpha.

Sapphire

Sapphire was sitting in her white marble throne, half listening to complaints, quests, and ideas. It was her first day being Predator. It was bad she wasn't listening to the people she promised to protect. But yesterday just keep coming back in her mind. She tries to ignore it, and listen. Her mind just won't allow it.

After fifteen times of trying she finally gives in to yesterday. The day that changed everything, everything. The day that made everything that happen to her, make sense.

Sapphire Blue Rose was trying to get home alive, from the announcement of being made Predator. People all around New Rome, already heard all about it. They were congratulating her, yelling her name, and hugging her to death. At first it was good, but it got old, very quick.

When she neared her house, she decide to make a run for it. She ran as fast as possible, ignoring the people screaming her name, and not even noticing the man standing in front of her. Thump, she crashes into him, and was about to fall backwards on the stone path. Fortunately, the man pulled her in to a hug. Unfortunately the man squeezes her to death, like he was trying to kill her.

Sapphire was about to use the tiny bit left of oxygen in her lungs to scream out help. Which she was cut off to doing so, because the very strong man lets go of her. This time she fall on the stone floor, but her rear end got the pain not her head.

Sapphire tries to catch her breath, while she's doing that she stares up at the man who almost killed her.

"Hello, daughter, I'm so proud of you." Mars said to her, his voice sounding like a father talking to her four-year-old daughter. Which last time she remember, she was thirteen. Sapphire couldn't tell him that, still trying to catch her breath.

"Well, I hopped you would say on the downside, like unnoticed. Though I guess some people are just made to stand out." Mars pauses to marvel at something I the distance, like a happy memory just coming back to him.

" Which remind me, we need to have a talk." His voice drop from proud father of a four-year-old to a bomb just blew up the entire earth.

If Kronos or Gaea came right now, and started killing everybody. Sapphire wouldn't notice at all.

Mars pulls her to her feet, "Come on, follow me." Mars marches off and beckons her to follow.



When they were finally at the place Mars wanted, he sat down. They were on a mountain in a cave in that very mountain. It was one of the many mountains that towers over New Rome, and camp SPQR.

Mars sits down, pats the ground beside him. Sapphire sits where he wanted her to, and prepares to listen.

"Do you know who your mother is? Where you got your beautiful looks from?" Mars asks, surprising Sapphire. His eyes staring outside the cave.

The most craziest thing that pops in her head after that question was "beautiful looks." I have beautiful looks, who knew? Sapphire thought to herself. Then the question actually processes in her mind.

"No, no I don't know. Remember I was left at a orphanage, or have you forgot." Sapphire answers bitterly, trying her best not to snap at him. Then remembering her kind, and loving parents she has now because of the abandonment.

" Do you want to know her name," he asks blankly still not making eye contact.

"No, I rather not."

"We'll you have to, because it's something you need to know. Your mother's name is Aphrodite."

Sapphire didn't understand. Her mother name is Aphrodite, does that mean her father is not Mars then ? Does that mean she's not a Roman? Does that mean she can charm-

Mars cut her thoughts off as he started to tell Sapphire a story. "When your Mother found out about you, she loved you. But knew she couldn't have you, or kill you. Which lead to a huge argument, never mind that. We decided to put you somewhere safe, and forgotten. That way you wouldn't know about your powers or about us. When we found the perfect place for you, we left you there to grow up. We looked after you from time to time, and helped you the best we could. "He took a long breath then continued.

"Well when those demigods came to town, we knew it may me good idea for them to adopt you. To have demigods to watch over you, and protect you. For a while we thought it was good, you were safe, and you had demigods watching over you every second. "

Mars shook his head, like trying to forget about something. "When that stupid thing came to kill you, but failed. We knew straight away you'll learn about the gods. Later after that mega fight, we let you go to Camp Half-blood . We didn't claim you though, which were sorry about, by the way. -"

This time Sapphire cuts him off, " then why did you then?"

"Because of prophecies, destinies, choices, and the other gods. Especially the other gods, they knew you needed to be claimed. They started to get noisy. Knowing that your not theirs. They almost thought it was Aphrodite, but wasn't for sure. Because you would already be claimed by now. Which meant you have a secret. That's why I claimed you. I played it off as I forgot about you, and I was too busy to claim you earlier. Anymore questions?" Mars flicks his gaze to Sapphire.

There were too many she didn't know where to start. Or was it the other way around. She now knows why this all happened to her. She was mad for it, too.

" You played with my life like a toy. Like it didn't matter. You forced my parents to adopt me." Sapphire was angry but her anger soon turned into sadness.

"No, no, not at all we can't play with people like that. We letted them adopt you."

Sapphire kind of felt better by that. She felt conflicting emotions rise up inside. She didn't know if she should hate him. Or kill him. Suddenly Sapphire remembers that she doesn't know why he was here telling her this.

"Why the heck are you here." Nervousness shoots all around her body. Don't know what answer he is going to give. Is it going to be good or bad ? She had a tight gut feeling it's going to be bad.

"Calm down, nothing bad. I'm just here warning you, preparing you, and telling you."

Relief floods happily through Sapphire. She relaxes as she stands up.

"Where are you going?" Asks Mars curiously.

"Parents are going to be worried." That's the only thing Sapphire can manage to say. After all these emotions.

"Okay, but you must swear on the river Styx not to tell anyone."

Sapphire ignores him, and just stumbles outside on the ledge of the cave.

"You must not tell anyone." Mars comes up behind Sapphire, and grabs her wrist.

"I won't tell anyone right now, but I'm not promising anything to you. When I get home, I'll going to get into my comforting bed and sleep." Sapphire replies as she slips from his firm grip, and leaves.



"Sapphire, Sapphire , Sapphire." A demigod was whispering, and nudging her back to reality. Sapphire looks up, and remembers where's she's at, what's she's doing. A couple of demigods were surrounding her waiting for a answer.

"I understand, but please tell me and great detail how I can help." Sapphire trying to cover that she wasn't listening. Oh let this please not be a demigods that came back from a quest, Sapphire thinks to herself. Well luckily it isn't, it's a idea. Which again she half listens to, because she just very decided right then to keep her secret the secret that she's a Alpha.

Awesome

Thank you very much.

I got ask you a question, though.

What is it?

Okay can I post this on goodreads creavite writing for everybody to see. I thought I should ask you because you came up with the Alpha. I understand if you don't want me to.

Alpha is Alpha. Just always ask if you mention me or if you rock the Omega. (sort of my thang)

Okay, so then it's a yes right just to be clear.

yes

Thank you.

You are welcome.

Okay, this story is so unrelated to demigods (nothing to do with them) but I wrote this with my friend, and I'm hopping for it to get known. P.s. next chapter will be a guy's POV.
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

I like it.

This is only a fraction of the first chapter and is all I have written right now

Demigod tales...
A hooded figure sits in a chair with smoke coming from the hood. When he spoke a spine chilling voice came out" Hello there... I shall tell you tales of great demigods. What shall we start with? Ohhhh I know ! The tale I shall tell you is The son of the ocean and the sky. Now let's begin.

Zane wakes in the back of the car and he was leaning on his sleeping older sister. At the moment the car stopped Zane opens the door then jumps out and runs out onto the sand of the beach. He kicks his sandals off then rips his shirt off and jumps in the ocean. He swam and did many things on the beachfront hours until His parents said" Time to go." Zane gets out of the water and says sadly" Can I stay here my friend James lives near here and I was going to spend a night at his house for a meek remember?" His dad sighs" Fine but be careful." His parents and his sister get in the car and dry off. Zane gets back in the water.

* At Olympus.*
Poseidon and Zeus were screaming at each other. Zeus shakes his head" Brother I am the king of Olympus! I deserve to take this young man as my son" Poseidon paces back in forth in anger" He loves the ocean, he loves horses, he thinks sharks are and I quote'Awesome.' All those things are my possessions! That means I get to make him my son!" Athena steps in and says" How about you both try to take him as your son and who ever gets him first wins him as a son." The godly brothers grin then get to work.
* back at the beach*
Suddenly the water glows and starts to pull Zane into the ocean but a gigantic lighting bolt hits him at the same time and Zane goes unconscious.
* Olympus*
Poseidon and Zeus sat in their thrones and looks at Athena" See what you did!?" Zeus says then continues" You made us kill a perfect young man to be a powerful demigod." Athena shakes her head" Look closer Zeus. You to Poseidon."
They look closer at Zane and see he was still breathing. Zeus shakes his head" But we both made him a demigod at the same time." Poseidon nods in agreement" Exactly brother. This has happened before but because no mortal has been able to become a demigod with 2 godly parents." Athena paces back in forth then says" Awww but Zeus have you forgotten when it is close to dark times impossible things happen." Poseidon smiles"Brother do you realize we have just made a all powerful demigod! But it also means dark times are coming." Zeus nods then leans back and continues to watch over Zane.

* at the beach the next morning.*
Zane wakes up with a major ache over his entire body. He tries to lean up but sees someone standing over him. Zane smiles then stands" James! What are you doing out on the beach so late?" He asks his friend not relaxing it was 10 AM the next day. James laughs" You must have passed out because it's Friday morning." Zane becomes wide eyed" Now I remember! I got hit by lighting!" James starts to say something but then sees that his clothes were burnt a little. James frowns but doesn't say anything just grabs Zane and they walk a mile along the road to James house.Zane and James walk through the forest of James's home but wooden targets on ropes swing all directions all over the forest most of them had arrows that were bulls eye. Zane was in awe" Did you shoot all of these bulls eyes!?!?" James nods" I did oh not so wise one." Zane narrows his eyes then realizes what James meant and punches him in the arm" Hey!" James falls back then looks at his arm there was a dark black bruise. James walks away then walks back with a bow and arrow then sets up a non moving target. He hands the bow and arrow to Zane. He shows him how to put the arrow in and helps him aim then says" Now release." Zane releases but The arrow lands far away from the target making Zane angry and he punches the tree hard making a hole in it and cracking the tree almost making it fall over. James gawks at Zane" Zane it usually takes multiple strong hits with a sledge hammer to do that. Zane when you got hit by lighting were you in the water and did the water look normal." Zane was speechless for a minute then responds" It was glowing." James runs off to his room and Zane runs after and finds him reading a book. James looks up from the book" I do not believe this. But Zane your the last piece of prove to conclude my theory that geek mythology are not myths." Zane laughs" Yeah right! You truly are a lunatic." James leads Zane to his pond then James dunks Zane in their and holds him. Zane thrashes and electricity flys through the air then James presses a button on his watch stopping the timer at 8 minutes. James let's go of Zane and Zane turns fast and punches James but the water from the pond and the air turns into 60 mile an guy winds that follow Zane's fist, with the added water and winds the hit made James fly 40 feet through the air. James lands with a thud,unconscious.Zane gawks at his hand then looks at James and sees his timer was at 8 minutes. Zane puts together he was under water for 8 minutes. Zane carries James up to his bedroom and lays him down on his bed. James wakes up an hour later and Zane instantly asks" I'm the son of Poseidon aren't i?" James smiles" No your something that is barely mentioned in myths. On very rare occasions the gods can make a mortal a demigod. But never can 2 gods make A mortal be the son of 2 gods. Something went wrong maybe and boom your the son of Zeus and Poseidon now." Zane faints with one word"Dafuq."

Um that's not even half of the first chapter.....

I did divide them into paragraphs. Well yeah sorta.

I write my own way.