Young Writers Group discussion

I'm going to post some stuff here, hopefully it will be exiting!

So, this is a story I'm working on, about several 7th grade girls with magical powers.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/chapte...

I like it

Thanks!

I updated.

Does anyone think the plot is getting boring? Or am I doing an OK job.

You overuse a lot of words as well as reusing alot of the same plot detail. I'm not feeling a plot climax yet. I can feel the story moving forward though, which is good. I applaud the effort so far, keep chugging away.

Yeah, I use detail a little to much. Thanks, though! The climax is Close!!