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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

You walk out on me
And you leave me
In the hardest time
Of dealing with all
Of the drama that
You caused then
You walk back in
When I moved on
You actually
Think that the 3
Little words I
Love you will
Fix the damage
You've done
Well think again


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

sounds like something held in for awhile. cool



xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments go on my profile and go on my crap poems. comment pleaz!!


message 4: by tweker (new)

tweker bla | 1 comments wow........... that is the bomb i love it!


xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments what?


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

i am not good at poems...wish i was tho


xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments me 2.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I like to write...but only songs...I am too embarassed to put them up


xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments aaaaw!!!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

wuT?


message 11: by xXRossiya AruXx (new)

xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments i wnt 2 c em!!!!


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

well...if I get the couirage to put them up I will tell you....send m,e a message I hjave no one else to talk to


message 13: by xXRossiya AruXx (new)

xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) | 25 comments kk


~♥~ MeganBitch ~♥~  | 20 comments hmm.... i wright a lot what kind you looking 4?


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

a loud sharp echo came through the window,
another angel fell from the sky.
my father put away his rifle,
having no sympathy as time passed by.
he came through the door,
with the bleeding corpse.
using hate and valor,
as his only source.
his face and horns,
covered in the by the blood.
he stomps in deeply,
with his boots covered with mud.
"are you ready for dinner?"
he asked in my life.
as i sat at the table,
with a fork and a knife.


(hope u ppl who r religious dont take it offensive...)


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

i can only write stories


~♥~ MeganBitch ~♥~  | 20 comments 0-0 good uh.... yea i liked it =^.^=


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Drip...
Drip...
Water leaking out a pipe
Drip...
Drip..
Blood falling off a cut
Drip...
Drip...
Tears rolling down a thousand cheeks
Drip...
Drip...
Sand in the hourglass of life running out.
We're running out of time.
Wake up and live.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Btw, I'm not a cutter. I just wanted something that dripped.


message 20: by Fee♥ (new)

Fee♥ | 5 comments wow everyday I fascinated by the people on goodread rock on


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

cheah


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

nothin, 4get i said that


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

...


message 24: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 08, 2009 11:51PM) (new)

(\__/)
(=' . '=)
(o)---(o)

the fat bunny O_O


message 25: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 13, 2009 07:27AM) (new)

lol
cute bunny


message 26: by Justin (new)

Justin (justjustin) | 11 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

Read read read plox.
most of em suck.
But hey
;3
Read em for..
Boring-ness?


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

ummm i think that would be a better paragraph or short story :)
mebbe lengthen it..
tell the story behind wht u wrote...
make the story the poem... feel it :)


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

niiice


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

deleted user wrote: "You walk out on me
And you leave me
In the hardest time
Of dealing with all
Of the drama that
You caused then
You walk back in
When I moved on
You actually
Think that the 3
Little wo..."


who was this!?


message 30: by x.Lithium.x (Cappy) (last edited Sep 04, 2009 08:22PM) (new)

x.Lithium.x (Cappy) (scarsandguitars) | 3 comments You left me alone to die,
I fell for you and your lie,
Why do I deserve this?
This is all bulls**t!
Why don't you love me?
Why don't you care?
I don't deserve this,
this isn't fair
you kill me inside,
with all your lies,
Blood will be on the knife,
cuz it's gonna claim my life...

(the love of a girl's life left her so she wants to die- for those who don't get it)


message 31: by Esmmett (new)

Esmmett covelt | 5 comments


message 32: by Esmmett (new)

Esmmett covelt | 5 comments omg it was awesome goood job tooo i loved it wow u guys r good poem writers i suk at writing poems reallly like man but goood job i would read ur guyses poems anytime


♥♥Skarlett♥♥ ♥♥Skarz♥♥ | 4 comments awesome name Esmmett! :)


♥♥Skarlett♥♥ ♥♥Skarz♥♥ | 4 comments pretend to Love me or hate me,
i dont care,
i know you want me
to be your teddy bear.

ha ha that was random.... :)


message 35: by mama me ya??? (new)

mama me ya??? (emo_love) | 5 comments you left me for dead
then came back
expecting me to be alive
you saw the pain in my eyes
the slits on my wrists
and yet you said nothing
you thought nothing of it
thought it was normal
but things change
and i dont love you
i fell hard
for someone else
not thinking bout the pain
he could cause
i just wanted the love
so maybe
just maybe
the blood would run clear


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