Writing Wonders discussion

Hey I hope that I am in the right section^^ I have decided to give it a try and to write a poem...It is my first poem written in my life and I didn't find a perfect name for it...anyway hope to like it~

Today was a clear sky,
Without a cloud,without a sight.
The feeling is always the same
Without you everything’s a shame…

Only if I hear your voice I can feel better,
Only if I hear your heart I can be happy,
But without you I am unhappy
Cuz you konw I'll love you forever.

All your thoughts are strange to me,
If you say just I agree
And I will be the one
Shooted by your gun.

All around me are people,
Good and bad, simple and crazy ones
All of them are like eagles
Cuz they like the way it comes.

The feeling is always the same,
Everything without you is a shame.
All my little lies can hurt you bad
Cuz you know that I’m already dead…

I had written another poem at school...hope to enjoy it

Angels and roses

Angels are in the light
And roses are in the dark,
Their wings are very white
And their petals are like a mark...

A mark for what I really am
A mark for what I supposed to be,
A fly for who is calm
And a fly for who is free...

All is kept in a lie
And all is found when we die,
But do we really know
What we really want to show?

Your poems are really GOOD

Kat wrote: "wow you should be a writer!!!"

I should but I am not...anyway hope to enjoy it...

My eyes are seeing only your face
And my ears are hearing only your voice
But why does not my heart
Feel like you are my art?

Everyday I think about you
And every night I dream about you
But why are you so sad
When I am asking you that?

Why are you getting mad
When I am going back?
Why are you so sad
When I am calling you like a dad?

I don't know
I don't want to make a show
A show in which you would leave me
And I would cry when I would set you free...