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Life in D Minor--HELP!!!
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like, idk if you've ever watched Gilmore Girls -- this is just an example -- but rory's friend laine rlly wants to play drums, but her mom won't let her, plus the drums are too expensive. so laine makes an agreement w/the store manager that she can come in and play the drums, w/o actually buying them, for a while every day after the store is closed and all.
and there's a similar situation in the movie "once" where one of the mc's plays the piano but she can't afford one, so the manager of a music store lets her play the piano in the store.
so maybe jonah could make some sort of deal w/the store manager that he can come in and play the guitar once in a while. could that work out instead??
Um, fire escape? I'm not sure, I'll think about it, I don't have experiance breaking into places, lol.
There should be a hole in the defense- like a glitch in the alarm system that is acesseble from the internet, or school computer. Then, he can find the guard system and whenever they change, sneak through.
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like, idk if you've ever watched Gilmore Girls -- this is just an example -- but rory's ..."
Oh! That's a good idea, I didn't think of that...maybe I could do that, but I think it's cooler if he breaks in...I don't know why, but I like it that way...hmm, I'll think about it. Agh this is hard! >.<
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Oh, good idea! But...don't they lock the fire escape? I dunno...
Oooh, maybe he can go in through the kitty door!! lol :D Or maybe the back door is left unlocked? OR he could pick the lock or something...
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yeah, good point...yeah, i've been thinking it was too unrealistic that he kept breaking in every day for nine years, without getting caught...
OMG!! I know what I'm going to do!!! He breaks in the first night, but the manager catches him, and THEN he makes a deal with the manager, and the manager allows him to come in when he wants. yay!!! :D does that sound realistic?
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that's a good idea, but he's only eight. i don't think he'll be able to do all that...lol
so i think that when he breaks in, he'll go through the kitty door or something (the manager keeps a cat in the store). and then, the manager catches him, and yeah...yay :D
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Cool! But then, wat will the manager do?
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haha thanks!! :D
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The manager is mad at first, but then once he hears Jonah's story, he makes a deal with Jonah that he can come in to the store whenever he wants to play the guitar, as long as he's supervised.
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That way his parents won't be all, "WHERE'D YOU GET THAT GUITAR?!!" too. Which is cool. :)
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oh, if he broke in to the store all the time, he wouldn't actually steal the guitar, he'd just play it there. :D but i like brigid's idea, so yay! :D
Oh. I thought you were coming up with a way for him to steal it. *blushes* My bad.
I'd have him steal the key, or combination for the lock. That way, he'd be able to use it indefinitely.
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It's okay. :D
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That's a good idea, but if you look at message 11, I already figured out what to do, lol :D
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I'm having some trouble with the next scene of my story, Life in D Minor. I need my MC, an eight-year-old boy named Jonah, to be able to break into a music store at night WITHOUT getting caught. ...And, he has to be able to break in to that store for 9 years after that, STILL without getting caught. How can he do this? Is there any way he can break into a store without setting the alarm off, and without anyone knowing he's doing it? Aggh! Please help me! >.<