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message 1: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
A one floor house with two bedrooms.


message 2: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate opened the door of his house with the shining new key. The lock of his house was probably the only new thing there. He didn't want unexpected intruders. He'd hoped the house was clean but when he opened it, there were clothes everywhere. There was an unwashed plate on the table and it looked like a complete wreck. He felt very concious. "Uh.....this is it." he said.


message 3: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments Lyra was more awed by the size of the place to be much bothered by the mess. SHe didn't mind it anyways- she was used to it. "Wow." She said lamely.


message 4: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "If you think this is wow you must have seen some really bad days." Nate said picking up all the clothes. "Come in."


message 5: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She cautiously stepped over the threshold and nodded. She helped him with the clothes and said, "yes. Yes I have." A small smile crawled onto her face.


message 6: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "No that's ok." he said taking the clothes from her."I'll just kerp all this in my cupboard, should probably iron them." he muttered. He never had any visitors so he had never noticed the mess. "Just sit down." he said his face flushed. "I'll sort out this mess." he waved over to a rickety chair.


message 7: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "Alright then," she said. "You know I can help you if you'd like." She said as she sat down, watching him.


message 8: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate stuffed all the clothes into a cupboard and came outside. "Well, this is it kid." he said "It's not muchbut U hope you find it better than the streets."


message 9: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "It's much better, much better than anywhere I've lived before," she said, her face lit up with a rare happiness.


message 10: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate smiled at her. He'd never smiled much before but now he found himself smiling more often. "Thanks." he said. "That actually means a lot though there's one more thing you should know." his face turned serious. "I'm running out of money. And there's no food so I don't know how I can feed both of us."


message 11: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She looked at him for a while and then pondered the situation for a moment before saying, "No worries. I'll take care of that. I have... experience." She smiled at him.


message 12: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) He gave her a strange look. "You mean stealing, don't you? I should have known. You've been living on the streets." he sat down on a chair. "I've thought of that but I don't want to do it. It seems wrong"


message 13: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She bit back a small laugh and shook her head. "No," she smiled, "I didn't steal to survive."


message 14: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "Then what do you mean?" he asked "I thought that's how most peopel get by in the end."


message 15: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "If you're viewed as a child in the society it's not too hard to survive." Was all she replied.


message 16: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate caught on slightly and smiled "I think I see what you mean." he said. "You're really small...you can act really sweet if you want to..."


message 17: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She looked down and nodded. "Yes... wrapped up loosely it's that. Then again, being viewed as a child makes me vulnerable to all sorts of things, many of which I have experienced and wish not to expand on..."


message 18: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "No. You don't have to." he said hastily "But can you really do that? Does it work?"


message 19: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (last edited Oct 05, 2013 05:18AM) (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She replied, "Well of course it does work!"


message 20: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate grinned in spite of himself "Any other secrets you have hidden that could be useful?"

((Gotta go soon. Violin practice :|. It's the first day of my holidays. My mom is terlling me to practice everyday))


message 21: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments ((haha alright))

"Apart from the fact that I'm not part of the breeding facility and I can communicate telepathically with Pan over miles, no." She said and smiled.


message 22: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "I guessed you're not part of THAT thing." Nate said his face darkening "But your mouse, I didn't know."


message 23: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "Well I narrowly escaped it." She said and watched him. "This government is corrupted. I wonder what life was like 300 years ago." She sighed and said, "well... he can go, but he's got a restriction of distance."


message 24: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate nodded. "Never seen anything like it, that connection between you and your mouse. Sounds interesting." he never stayed around people for long so he didn't have to always read their thoughts but now his head was starting to hurt from trying to block out all the thoughts.


message 25: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "It is odd," she replied truthfully. "I don't know how it happened exactly- all that it can mean is that he's not a -real- mouse, if that makes any sense." She scrutinized his face for a moment then said, "are you feeling alright?"


message 26: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "I'm fine.". he said waving the question away. It was worse at close quarters so he got up. "Why don't you do your food-getting thing now." he said as an excuse for getting out of the house. "You must be starving."


message 27: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) ((Where to??))


message 28: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She nodded. "I suppose I am," she admitted. "Alright then, let's go."

((back to the park?))


message 29: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) ((ok))

Nate opened the door of the house and waited for Lyra to go out before he locked it behind him.


message 30: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments Lyra and Nate neared the house, carrying their limited supply of food.


message 31: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate opened the door of the house with his key and dumped the bags he was carrying on the foor near the door.


message 32: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She put her bags beside his and said, eyeing them, "are you actually hungry?"


message 33: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "Not realky." he said "I don't eat regular meals. I eat just when I'm hungry. So, not now. You can eat. you like." he went into his room to search for the antiseptic he usualky kept there in case he was in the middle of a street fight.


message 34: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "Same here," she replied and watched him go and return with the antiseptic. "What's that?"


message 35: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "Antiseptic." he said noting with some dismay that the bottle was almost empty. "If your cuts get infectee that could be an even bigger problem. Give me your hand." he was also holding some of his limited cotton stock.


message 36: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She showed him her hand. It was a small cut, and wasn't bleeding underneath. As she did os, she felt a jarring pain on her forearm from her other cut and forced herself not to wince.


message 37: by Ananya (last edited Oct 04, 2013 11:12PM) (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "Less stock." Nate said "So we have to be sparing." he detected the pain she felt as her thoughts went into his mind. "You have another cut." he said "Come on. Don't try to hide it."


message 38: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments She gingerly unraveled her sleeve and looked at the wound. The skin in the inside was charcoal black and oozing out blood. SHe looked up at Nate, biting her lip.


message 39: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "That's bad." he said "Worse than I thought it would be. Might be infected." he took a large wad of cotton and dumped the rest of the antiseptic bottle on it, gingerly pressing the cotton towards the wound.


message 40: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments Lyra tried to squirm away, here eyes wide in pain as he pressed the cotton down. She bit down hard on her lip, stifling a cry.


message 41: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "It's okay. It's okay." Nate whispered trying to soothe her. "It's alright. Don't worry." he had heard the trick was to keep on talking and he was trying to do just that as he carefully brushed the cotton over the wound. It didn't look as if it was getting any cleaner. "Just breathe." Nate said.


message 42: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments Lyra took a few shuddering and long breaths, her eyes stinging. She took in more shallow breaths, and cringed at the pain, but she stopped squirming. The wound burned horribly.


message 43: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) The cotton was really dirty and Nate stopped to throw it in the dustbin. There was no antiseptic left and very less cotton. He looked again at the ugly wound. "It's okay." he murmered, more to reassure himself. He didn't know what to do.


message 44: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) ((Should she develop a fever? Maybe the wound turns septic?))


message 45: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments ((Yes! Amazing idea!!))

Lyra just looked back at the wound and rolled her sleeve back over it. "Thanks, Nate," she mumbled. "I'll be fine, I'm sure." She looked at him and said in a slightly wavering voice, "I'm totally knackered."


message 46: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) ((Thanks! I love the drama))

"Hey! Don't do that." Nate exclaimed. "You have to keep it open. It'll grow worse if you keep it covered like that." he sighed "And actually I don't think it's okay. That looks really bad. It needs some medecine which I don't have." he sat down on a chair rubbing his temples. Taking her in had been more trouble than he imagined.


message 47: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments ((welcome! Me too))

"It's fine, I promise," she replied, but rolled up the sleeve again anyways. She looked at him and said, "perhaps sleep will help?" She asked. "Or I can go."


message 48: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) "No, you're not going anywhere." Nate said firmly. "But if you want to sleep, I can get the bed ready. I'll see what I can do about that cut tomorrow." he gave her a wan smile. "Guess I need some sleep too."


message 49: by sᴀʀᴀʜ (new)

sᴀʀᴀʜ | 1306 comments "I'll help you make the bed, I can't just do nothing," she replied, and smiled a bit. "Thank you, Nate. I really appreciate it."


message 50: by Ananya (new)

Ananya (ananyashenoy) Nate walked to the room that wasn't his and opened the door. Ok. It wasn't too bad. The bed was already half-made and it was pretty clean. "Here." he said.


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