Books I Loathed discussion

The author of this novel changed her characters completely!!!! The main male character was a bad-a#$ independent, player and in the end he begs the main female character to come back to him and that he needs her more than he needs air. Also, the female character becomes a reckless endangerment when before she was sweet and naïve. I believed this ruined the characterization the author began the novel with.

This bothered you, yeah?

I am toying about with this in the work I'm currently writing. Messing about with the characters like so. Don't know if I'm wasting my time.

The thing that I didn't like about it was the instantaneous change. I like when characters change over a period of time, but an immediate change without the presence of a traumatic event is simply, unexplainable.

Indeed :)