Paranormal Creatures discussion

What was the most shocking twist for you? Please use the spoiler hiding formula

(view spoiler)[ when Jesse turned his back on Rachael. I was so shocked. I still can't get over it. (hide spoiler)]

That was so hard to write! (view spoiler)[ I had it that way in the first draft. Then in the second I couldn't do it so I changed it but then I knew I had to change it back... it was just so heart breaking. I mean she is abandoned by Elizabeth and then Joshua plays along before he leaves. So then she gets her child taken away and is screaming for Jesse and what does he do? Leaves her to Michael. I was very mad at him for that but still. :P (hide spoiler)]

I'm glad you changed it back.

It definitely worked better this way, however depressing it was.