Aspire to Write discussion

If you feel your writing needs some adjustment, feel free to post here. If you have suggestions to give to other writers posting here, feel free.

I warn you that this is not a "softie" critiquing section. No one has to choose their words wisely, just tell you what they think you need to fix. If you disagree with someone's comment about your work or feel hurt by it, you could tell them or ignore them. I would choose the second option; less potentially hurtful in the long run.

I hope you get the most out of this discussion!

Peace!
~Tia

I also have a word to say as a moderator. If you do not want harsh criticism, then say so beforehand so that we will know. It will be easier for us. So now everyone can share your writing so that we can give suggestions and enjoy your writing!

-aN!! aka Anuhea

I Am Lina http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Just to tell you, all the dates and names cannot be changed. Those are real events that happened.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

A story i'm beginning based on a dream i had. Tell me what u think!

It's really good! Keep writing more!

Thanks!

:)

well, if anyone even comes here, I'm just posting the link to all of My Writing here. Feel free to comment.

Here's some of my writing:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Feel free to leave constructive cristism and your thoughts. Thx!!! :)

Opinions wanted --
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
It's still growing ..

But before, it would be wise to check this short writing (to get the feel of the characters) --
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

You don't have to post your opinion on the second one. I seriously suck at grammar. The main writing (first link) might be a bit rough

Please read and give me your thoughts!! :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Aly ♫SOCCER GOALIE♫SOFTBALL CATCHER♫ wrote: "well, if anyone even comes here, I'm just posting the link to all of My Writing here. Feel free to comment."

hey, how did u add that link?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

here's a romance story that I posted yesterday...its inspired by This Lullaby by Sarah Dessen. Enjoy! :)

Alright, I need criticism. I can handle tough criticism. I actually wrote this for english class, as a ninth grader, and got a perfect score. However, there was nothing even marked. I have more chapters saved on the document with this, but am adding bits and pieces to goodreads at a time.
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
The title is still to be determined, i just have a temporary one in place. This is a fantasy story with inspiration taken from numerous novels/series I have enjoyed. Please don’t feel bad criticizing me, I need some kind of criticism.