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message 1: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe I love the I Am Proof one!


message 2: by Tia Todd, If everyone loved and nobody lied... (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 84 comments Mod
Thos e are good!


message 3: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments I like the first one! But they're all super good.


message 4: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) I like Imagination. ^__^


message 5: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) i need to make some. i like poetry !


message 6: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Yeah, poetry is really good. I have some on my profile.


message 7: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) I second that! Poetry is very good!


message 8: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) Oh wait...I should say i thrid that. XD


message 9: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Stuck in glue!?


message 10: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Absolutely no one has read my writing. Oh well, I only have one story anyway and I wrote it at like midnight ages ago and it's not very good.


message 11: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments What? Umm...Ok then. You might have to be my friend to see it, but I'll try:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

It's kind of an inside joke with a friend of mine, and it's meant to be a bit sarcastic. If that doesn't work, the title is something like 'Savage Pleading Eyes.' (Couldn't think of a better one)


message 12: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments You don't like horror? Don't worry, it's not really that scary. I'm not into scary movies and stuff, so I don't know how to write that genre. Plus it's not meant to be serious.


message 13: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Not silly, it's just...I don't know how to explain it. I first came up with the idea to just entertain a friend, like as a joke. It's about a 'were-rat', and it's like a scary story, but underlayed with sarcasm. Because the idea is so ridiculous. It's more suspense than horror, too.


message 14: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yeah, we joke that there's a wererat in the gym locker room cuz some guys saw a HUGE rat in a big tube like thing above the locker room.


message 15: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yeah...Actually, it turned out later to be a sock. But it really did look like a rat. It was so freaky.


message 16: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Oh, I'm in a 'writing' mood, so I just posted three poems I wrote for school. The middle one is kind of long and boring, but I had to write a narrative, and that's the only story I could come up with. Anyway, if you want to look, here they are:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 17: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yay! Thanks for reading them. You're the first person, I think.


message 18: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Like I said, the middle one is llllooooooonnnggg. But the other two are fairly short.


message 19: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments The long one? Thanks!


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