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Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) Awesome! Thanks loads for being honest :D. Hah, seriously - good luck! I am looking forwards to reading it :).


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) Er my gosh you did The Third Di Angelo?


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) My gosh!!! I was reading it on a thread and I never noticed who wrote it! Oh, jeez, *headdesk!*


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) Comments, feedback; and assorted thoughts:

So far this is excellently well-written for a fanfic, you could perhaps cease in almost quoting from the books directly( e.g "Disguised as a lawyer" "Faces from the Fields of Punishment").
You are showing quite admirable recall for the books though :).
(Also, "How in the Underworld?"
:)) )
Oh. I love how she thinks: "Though Nico didn't have the Hades figurine yet" shows rather realistic nerves, lol!

Hm...I'm offering advice on one thing: If she is a demigod wouldn't she already KNOW Persephone? For that matter wouldn't some-one reading it know her presuming they were a fellow demigod? Thoughts...

And there is my self-absorbed rather uppity feedbacks :). I've only read the first chapter as of yet... Thanks for writing!


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) *aghast*
Ron WEASLEY?

Random: MY DOG JUST STARTED EATING MY JEWELRY!

Family heirlooms, Fiske.

FAMILY HEIRLOOMS!

But they're fine,


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) Lol...You know Anastasia Inkyfingers had a crush on him too :).

Incorrect, bzzt; my brother and I just chased her outside, she's a puppy and not house-trained, thus chasing her outside, in 8 degrees Fahrenheit. In FLUFFY SLIPPERS!

All's when that ends well...It worked out despite it being harrowing...


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) ;)

Not where we live. It's not Canada but it's bad...

Actually it was less lol and more abject terror.

(And I have to amend the previous statement: we've had her for a week and she's four months and eight days old. Ergo: she isn't house-trained, ergo, getting her outside).

And I must deparht...


Theodosia of the Fathomless Hall (taelianaofthewind) Heh. Either way I had already deparhted...:P.


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