The Clans discussion

This is where the apprentices can rest.

(ah im so excited for training)

(said who?)

(what)

(okay fine waite who my mentor again)

(who said "ah im so excited for training")

(moonpaw)

(you might want to delete all of those, or put them in the curve things)

(there is that okay)

Lostmist scurried into the aprentice den. "Moonpaw! Where are you? There's a training session today!" she announced as the other apprentices stared drowsily at her.

"yes im up"moonpaw growls then jumps up in a flash when she realizes what lostmist just said

(put yes im up in quotations) "Come, Moonpaw, I should show you, we found a fox trap." Lostmist said.

(No, that was moonpaw talking)

(not the curve things, these "" )

"okay"she says with fear and excitement

(oh yeah. I must have misunderstood you)

i know i forgot for a minute but i fixed them

The walked out of camp together side by side. (lets move this to the forest)

okay"so,"she says as they walked through the entrance and into the forest "where is this fox trap?"

"I'll show you" she said, (move to forest discussion)

as they walk into the forest moonpaw hears a catawale of a cat"what was that? did someone fall into the trap?"she asks lostmist in panic

"We better go check on it," she said. They ran through the forest side by side. They came across the silver foxtrap, and inside laid a golden brown kit. "We must get her out at once, look at her tail!" she shouted looking at her stuck fluffy tail.

Lostmist gently tapped the kit. "Whats your name?" she asked. The kit stuttered "H-ha-hazel, where's my m-mom?" she asked.

The kit tried to wrigle free but she squeeled with pain. "Moonpaw! Go get help!" Lostmist shouted.

"yes lostmist"she yells over her shoulder as she ran back to camp

"Alright Hazel, I'm going to get you out." she calmly stated to chew at the wire. "Ah!" screamed the kit, "You're hurting me!" she shouted in pain. Lostmist gently licked the kit. "We'll get you out." she said. "Moonpaw hurry" she thought

(Is hazel someone's character or can I put it in adoption?)

(put her in adoption, she's like brownkit, infact shes brownkits sister)

Hazel was writhing in pain as Lostmist tried to pull her out. "It'll be alright," Lostmist said to the kit and herself, yet the wire barely had a few teeth marks on it.

Elise, wrote: "(put her in adoption, she's like brownkit, infact shes brownkits sister)"

((Actually, that wouldn't work because Brownkit was originally born in Windclan and couldn't be a Shadowclan cats sister.))

(Hazel is a loner kit then, no family, just wandering alone, and could like joyclaw or sandpelt come help Hazel)

Lostmist bit the metal and it suddenly snapped. The kit lay breathing on her side till she sat up. "Well I'm off." Hazel said. "Wait! You're just a kit! You can't go wandering alone!" Lostmist said. Hazel turned to her. "Why Not?! I can do whatever I'd like! Thank you for saving me, but I know that other loners aren't that friendly to kits!" Lostmist picked up the kit. "You are coming with me, I can't let a defenseless kit wander about!" she shouted through fur. "Put me down! Put me down!" yowled Hazel as they stalked back to the camp.