Write Your Heart Out ツ discussion

Umm I like to write little poems and haikus :) I don't usually let anyone read them but..... yeah!

The music calls, I
hear symphonies in my head
ensnared in a trap

A lonely new moon
hidden from earth's harsh cruelty
but also to love

All these swimming thoughts
are drowning me unconscious
in a crashing wave

All alone I stood
slowly began to crumble
now i am sitting

Burnt lungs and tired eyes
is it the frozen weather
or the cold heart's disease?

Waves along the shore
your words stain my memory
both are dangerous

Words tumbling out
no restraint; can't hold them back
mistakes have been made

They are pretty!

Oh thank you :) thanks a lot! i know they're kind of... sad.. lol

Life is blurry.
in and out
of proportion.
Confusing,
and bleak.
But sometimes
that's what makes
the good times
shine brighter.

Imperfection always has limits
No one is completely imperfect
Everyone has a bit of perfect in them
Most just don't realize their own perfection.

Collarbones are wings:
fragile, delicate, and beautiful
dark, lovely, and deep
mysterious, flawless, and enthralling
yet they seem so utterly useless.

Porcelain, dark and secretive
Lying in her own sorrows
Will she ever escape her shell

winter's snow and ice
Their glistening beauty may look nice
But don't fall in to their lies
Though the chill makes you feel alive
Frozen always comes with a price
(wrote this one in literally 2 minutes so excuse the poor rhyming)

Lights shine through dark fog
it paints a hopeful picture
for my heavy heart

Monoku:8 syllable line

Winter is a lingering day.

It's a beautiful chaotic disaster with some lovely perks.

I've lost my true self; it's withered
away like those fall leaves blanketed
beneath the frigid snow

I'm hiding in the background
Outside looking in
But I'm finding my way
Just a little wallflower
Losing faith again
But I'm breaking away

The sodden clouds took over the sky mercilessly. a brief battle between peace and chaos. The sun queen shining bright. Then quick as lightning, dims to her final flicker; surrendering to the overpowering darkness. Leaves flying in wild pursuit. Trees eventually tugged from their roots. Nature on the course of disaster and yet strangely there are those who still hold hope for the bright future ahead of us. Everyone wants to be happy and nobody wants pain, but we can't have a rainbow without any rain.

My voice is too often a whisper compared to the thousand shouts echoing through these hallways.

These are awesome! Write more.

Awwweh thank you so much!! :') =crying of joy

Those are so simplistically pretty! I love how you use your words so that they all make an impact. Good job! :)

AHHHHHHH people, this is my friend! lol. I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW YOU JOINED THE GROUP! too many Alyssas to keep track of haha
THIS MY FRIEND
lol sorry I've had a little bit too much ice cream

Daughter of The Night wrote: "AHHHHHHH people, this is my friend! lol. I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW YOU JOINED THE GROUP! too many Alyssas to keep track of haha
THIS MY FRIEND
lol sorry I've had a little bit too much ice cream"

HAHAHA! I don't even want to ask. X'D

and she's amazing...an amazing writer, yes...I had no idea

@Za-za- haha ;)

Haha Alyssa :P I understand the ice cream, it's my life! Thank you so much everyone that commented <3

XD

Non-human poetry in the perspective of a teacup :)
Teacup's affair
______________________
Her lips graze my rim
Teasing me, leaving me breathless
She empties my soul as I swim
She calls to me with every hymn
Sung soft through the stillness
By the fire, where tis dim
And I too, read tales of heartbreak and forgiveness
Over her shoulder, I quickly skim
Rocking back and forth in swiftness
Then again she sips from my brim
My insides stir, losing thickness
And I'm tingling limb from limb
Though my body is merely stiffness
I wish to be loved, like she loves him

whoa

I have a lack of motivation,
to engage in social interaction.
I prefer solitary activities.

Books and tea and chocolate
Are served best near the fire
Characters fly in the imagination

Caged Wildflowers
They sit lonely on a shelf
Just waiting to wither away

He texts me "was up beautiful"
I find that insulting and reply
"But you're not Augustus Waters."

RIP Gus <3 -July 2

I have the ability of switching
From sassy to incredibly shy
In a matter of seconds

I guess I don't trust humanity, in fact it terrifies me.
Sincerely,
Social Anxiety

My bones ache for this love
A beautiful and whispered hush
Dimpled simper and cheek flush

Missing good friendships
All they are is past now
But oh how I grieve

Missing good friendships
All they are is past now
But oh how I grieve

Chocolate: smooth, creamy, melting
Wraps me in a delicious hug
Always there for my failures

Slept and slept and slept and slept
My throat keeps getting smaller
I lie in an endless abyss of silence
I wonder if they'll miss me?
I might stay in a day or two more
Would they forget about me?
Come on, just let that rain pour

I love it! :)

Oh thank you! :)

that was the best poem eva!

Awehh thank you! Which one?