Creative Writing Ideas discussion

This is where I post the plot of my books.

I've only done like five chapters so far, but I'm kind of thinking along these lines.

Tanner Smith is invited to Rosewood Academy along with his sister Kate, Kathryn Valen, whom he is in love with, and Kathryn's sister Eliza. He finds out that Kathryn likes him, but then she tries to stay away from him. Once they are trained to fight at Rosewood, they have to try to protect each other and themselves.

I'm trying to get some romance (nothing worse than pg 13 though), which is where Kathryn and Tanner come in, but also good and evil war, because those are the kind of books I like. Basically like the same knind of romance/fantasy battles you get inThe Lost Hero, The Son of Neptune, and the rest of the Heroes of Olympus series by Rick Riordan. Please tell me what you think, or if you have any ideas on how to edit the plot.

Sounds good so far. Rick Riordan is awesome.

That sounds pretty good. Maybe Tanner and Kathryn can get together after the Good vs. Bad war. .....

@ brooke thank you

@willowshine well they they kind of already are but not officially. Please read the story if you haven't. If I feel like it at the end and people like it then I might make it a series.

Also, if anyone has any ideas on something I can add to the story soon that has more excitement, like a battle or two, message me some details. I will give you credit for helping.