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Anyone can ride at any time


message 2: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan was just sitting, minding his own business.


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Kala Nazari cautiousely sat down, looking around for catchers.


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((Gtg))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah who was walking while reading a book finally stopped. She wanted to sit but somehow the subway bench was occupied. She saw an empty sit and saw a boy who was minding his own business. She sat down and tuck her honey shoulder blonde hair.


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Daniel | 371 comments Ryan saw a girl but pretended he didn't. He got a magazine sitting on a seat and read it.


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Kala carefully analyzed the people who came on. She started glaring at them.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah phone rang. "Hello?" she quiet for a while letting the person who called her talks. She look down and fiddle her hand. " Okay " she finally say. " bye" she ended her call. She sigh. Guess she have to babysit her friend's sister. She have two hours to go. She continue reading her book.


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Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked up from the magazine. He saw a guy staring at him. He hid under the magazine again.


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Kala swiftly walked over to a different seat.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah who was busy reading the book seems to notice the man staring at the guy who hid his face from the man.


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Daniel | 371 comments The guy who kept staring at Ryan was getting on his nerves. He was a rebel, after all.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah who started to get a bad feeling for the man that kept staring feels that she should help him. " Hey, can i talk to you for a second? " she finally break the ice and taking the boy by the wrist and get farther from the man.


message 14: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Why? What is it?" Ryan asked. He wasn't sure if she was a rebel or if she wasn't.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She stop at the corner of the subway. She finally let go of the boy wrist. She check for the man if he somehow followed them. The man wasn't. The boy was confused. She look into his eyes and frown. " I'm saving you from the scary looking man who stared at you like he's going to have you for supper, duh "


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Daniel | 371 comments Ryan leaned into her ears and whispered, "Are you a...rebel?"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She was shocked but she kept it cool. She did'nt know this boy. How can he tell if she's a rebel or not. " Not here " she whispered.


message 18: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Later," Ryan said. He sat next to the seat of the girl.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Hey, i never caught your name. " she said, looking at him while crossing her arms.


message 20: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Ryan," he said. He held out his hand.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She was confuse on why he lend out his hand to her. " I'm Hannah " she said, while she shove her both hands on her brown jacket.


message 22: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Are you still here?))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Daniel wrote: "((Are you still here?))"

((Still here, daniel))


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Daniel | 371 comments Suddenly, the bus stopped. People stood up and went out. Ryan decided to follow.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She follows after Ryan.


message 26: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan went out of the bus and walked to the bathroom. He needed to talk to Hannah.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah stop half way after she saw a male sign toilet room. " Are you serious that i should go in there? "


message 28: by Daniel (last edited Oct 17, 2015 06:20AM) (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "The trash can is the only thing left nobody would look for people," Ryan said. He saw the guy who was staring at him heading straight his way.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah saw the guy is coming straight at them. " We have to go, ryan " . She did'nt think second of letting Ryan to say a word and taking his wrist again and run from there.


message 30: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan struggled to escape. "WHERE ARE YOU TAKING ME?!?!," he screamed.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Ryan is getting on her nerve after he always asking her where she wanted to take her. She kept running with the boy. The man who they see earlier was now infront of them. She shocked.


message 32: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan stopped shouting. The man had sunglasses, so he couldn't see his gaze toward Ryan. Ryan suddenly remembered the tranquilizer in his pocket. He took it out and stabbed the man. The man suddenly collapsed.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah did'nt scream when she saw Ryan stab tranquilizer to the man. " Run! " she instructed. So they run before the man could catch them.


message 34: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments They ran and ran and ran until Ryan got tired. He sat down a nearby rock and said, "I can't believe I tranquilized a man!"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was quiet. She did not talk after they finally escape and lost the man.


message 36: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "You didn't answer my question," said Ryan. He looked up at Hannah.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She wanted to answer but she winced. She touch where the pain was formed. Blood have wet her grey t-shirt. The man must have shooting her on the left stomach by using a silence gun before Ryan tranquilized him.


message 38: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked at her injury and was shocked. "Sit on the rock," he said.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" No don't touch me! " She seethed. She was in pain but she try to keep it cool.


message 40: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments He searched his backpack for bandages and found some.


message 41: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Alright, now stay still," he said. He started to peel a bandage.


message 42: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Gtg. Gonna reply tomorrow.))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Daniel wrote: "((Gtg. Gonna reply tomorrow.))"

((okay. I'll wait))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" I said, " she growled. " don't touch me " . But the pain kept hurting her and she lost her energy to get mad.


message 45: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Bye! Oh wait, I mean later. I'm not sure. Btw bye!))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((i'm not sure if i can reply you later because our time zone is different. Mine's night time now.))


message 47: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((I'm back!))

Ryan stopped. He stared at Hannah. "Sorry," he said. He sat down the rock beside her. He took out a picture of his family.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((I'm back too:D))

She looked at Ryan and see that he took out a picture pf his family. " Hey, you've got a nice looking family there ". She smile.


message 49: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan smiled. "Thanks," he said. "They were the best family I ever had." His smile turned into a frown.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" I have a family like that once " She sigh. " Caring, lovable and treat me like a daughter they never had" . " But then, they used me. My original parents didn't want me! And i was then adopted by a new parents, they were different from my past parents. " she then hugs her knee. " Then they used me and leave me in this place. I have nowhere to go" She hide her face around her arms.


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