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message 2: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "So," Ryan asked, "where's the bathroom?"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Ryan stop the car engine. Hannah open the car door and slam it. " This is scary. " her face was searching.


message 4: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Got to charge. Gonna reply later!))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Okay. See ya))


message 6: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((I'm back!))

Ryan followed Hannah to the bathroom.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Hey!! By the way, its toilet not bathroom))

They were searching for the toilet and found one. When hannah wanted to enter it, Ryan was there watching her. " Ryan " she gave him the stern look. He was dumbfounded. She sigh and pushes Ryan on his stomach until he reach 5 meters away from the girls toilet. " And stay there " she said, and smile. She closes the main girls toilet and when inside.


message 8: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan decided to explore the school. He found a picture of a class. He was shocked when he found himself, standing in the picture. He then remembered he went to this school. He suddenly heard a scream coming from the bathroom. He ran to the girls bathroom as fast as he could.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was done doing her things and done washing her hands. She then turn and saw a snake was slithered under her legs. She scream.


message 10: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan opened the door and saw a snake slither up Hannah's jeans. He knew what he should do. He concentrated really hard and TRAVELED BACK IN TIME to the part where they were just opening the door to the bathroom.

((Now just repost what happened before the snake thing happened.))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
 When hannah wanted to enter it, Ryan was there watching her. " Ryan " she gave him the stern look. He was dumbfounded. She sigh and pushes Ryan on his stomach until he reach 5 meters away from the girls toilet. " And stay there " she said, and smile. She turn her back from ryan and was about to enter the toilet.


message 12: by Daniel (last edited Oct 20, 2015 03:29AM) (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan opened the door so fast that he was like The Flash. "Stop!" he said. He grabbed Hannah and pulled her out of the bathroom.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was startle and was grabbed by Ryan before she could open the main girls toilet room. " Ryan! " she said, frowning at him.


message 14: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Sorry! I was taking a bath.))

"Stay there," he said. He went to inspect the bathroom. He saw a snake slithering all over the floor. "We need to go," he said. He pulled Hannah until she was at the backseat. He started to drive the car.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Ryan " she said. " You know that i haven't....went to the toilet, right? "


message 16: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan didn't waste another second explaining to her. "I can become invisible AND travel in time."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" wait, what?? " she said.


message 18: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "I know you heard me."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah can't hold it anymore and she have no choice but to use her power. Its an emergency. Ryan is a dork. She thought to herself. She narrowed her eyes to the brake to stop the car. It was a strong inertia but it works. She then get out of the car and lock ryan's door with her power so he would'nt follow her. She run into a nearby forest and do her things.


message 20: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Hannah!" Ryan said. He needed to protect her, no matter how dangerous. He unlocked the door and ran to her.


message 21: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 20, 2015 05:14AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((lol really? She needed to do her things))

She then form a shield from woods and leaves to defence herself while running. " I'll be right back, ryan! "she yelled.


message 22: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Haha, just for comic relief.))

Ryan forgot that she had to "go". He waited until he saw her walking back to him.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((oh okay. I like comic, anime and manga. Just so you know))

She walked back at ryan and into the car. She didn't talk quite much on the road trip though.


message 24: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "So, it's telekenisis and creating things out of thin air? I like it," Ryan said. Then he stopped driving and parked the car. "We should get sleep," he said.


message 25: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 20, 2015 05:36AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
He looked at ryan and shrugged. " Well, you guess it ". " I'm going to sleep on the backseat. " . The weather was cold and the rain pour down like cats and dogs. They shiver and pull their jacket tightly. Luckily hannah saw a blanket thats enough to fit 3 people in the pocket of the passenger car. She ask if Ryan want to share it with her since she saw he was shivering too.


message 26: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "No," he said, "you need it more than I do."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Oh okay. " She wrap it around her and sigh. " So, warm " she snuggle onto it and sleep.


message 28: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked at her. She was so cute when she was smiling. He ran his fingers across her hair. He didn't think about thinking this, but it looks like he had developed (view spoiler).


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Thats cute))

Hannah was awake after he felt someone patting her hair. She was a cautious girl after all. She looked at Ryan and blush. She used her power to push ryan's hands away from her. " Didn't think i would do that aren't I " she teased.


message 30: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan blushed. He smiled.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She can't help but smile. " If you're cold, you can come at the backseat and share this blanket with me" . She gestured.


message 32: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "No, seriously. I don't need it." He tried to act charming.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
He looked at Ryan and she closed her both eyes. Then she open her left eyes and smile. The she close it again. She then get up from her lying and climb to the passenger side. She wrap the blanket around Ryan and she slept at ryan shoulder. " get some sleep, ryan " she yawn, and wrap the blanket tightly.


message 34: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked at Hannah. She was sleeping. He decided to sleep, too.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
They were sleeping soundly until the rain stop in the morning


message 36: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan woke up to the sound of laughter. He looked out of the window. He saw his parents playing with his six-year-old self. He shouted, "Mom! Dad!" But they didn't hear him. He shouted louder. They looked at his direction. Ryan shouted louder. Their smiles turned into frowns. "Mom? Dad?" he said. They looked at him and started to cry. Then Ryan saw his six-year-old self lying on the grass. He didn't move. Ryan's parents walked away. Ryan shouted to them. "MOM! DAD!" They didn't hear him. Ryan started to cry. He suddenly woke up. Hannah waked him up.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was having a good dream but she was awake by ryan's nightmare. It was a good fresh morning and its about 7 am. She woke him up and saw that he was crying. " Ryan. Ryan " she shake him.


message 38: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan didn't say something to her. He was drying his tears so fast none were left.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Are you okay? " she asked.


message 40: by Daniel (last edited Oct 20, 2015 08:50PM) (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Yeah," he replied.

((Sorry for the delay, I took a bath.))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She looked at Ryan. She was worried.


message 42: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan sighed. "I had a dream about my parents. They were with me. Suddenly, I died. I know, right? Weird."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Really? ". She patted Ryan's back gently and hug him.


message 44: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Sorry! Goodreads stopped before I could reply.))

Ryan smiled. "Thanks."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((I know!!! Me too!!))


message 46: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Lol!))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((its still stuck))


message 48: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((What do you mean?))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((wait. Its okay now))

She parted from the hug and cough. " Okay. You should be driving now. " she get the blanket off from ryan's body and throw it on the backseat.


message 50: by Daniel (last edited Oct 20, 2015 10:06PM) (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan started to drive. He stopped by a McDonalds.

((You know where to reply. MCDONALD'S!!!!!!))


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