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Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was still sleeping when Ryan stopped the engine's car.


message 3: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked at her. "Wake up, lazy bones!" He shouted.


message 4: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 22, 2015 06:12AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She woke up in a startle gasp and eventually knocking out ryan with her force kinda shield with her telekinesis power from his seat out the door. She gasp. She rub her eyes and cough. " Ryan! ". She shifted to ryan's seat and looked at ryan helplessly lying on his back aching. She chuckle.


message 5: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Ouch!" He said, rubbing his back.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was giggling to herself when she looked back at him, her face fell almost immediately when she saw he was rubbing his back, trying to get up desperately but fell on his butt. She step out from the car and close the car's door. She tucked in another piece of her hair from her view and lend her hand to Ryan.


message 7: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan grabbed her hand.


message 8: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 22, 2015 06:49AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She pulled him till he can stand by himself. He was all cover with dirt and soil. She brush it off with her hand starting with his shirt. Ryan raise his eyebrows. " Don't expect me to say sorry for what just happen because i'm not trying to" she gave him the dour face and she brushes his hair from the dirt and clap her hand satisfying. " okay! You're done"


message 9: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments They entered the shack. It was all empty except for a table and two chairs. They sat down and ate their food.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Its getting dark and cold. The shack was very much darker when the sun still up.


message 11: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked up at Hannah and said, "We should get some sleep."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She nodded, yawning. She zip up her jacket and sleep. Then she realize something she missed. She opens her eyes and stare at Ryan. " Don't dare patting and playing with my hair when i'm asleep " she warned.


message 13: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan smiled. "Okay," he replied.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Good ". Then she turned her body from ryan and eventually smilling to herself. She know it wasn't true but. Wait. He's reading this. Stop. Ryan whatever you reading now, its not true. I mean it, stop patting my hair. Okay. Goodnight.


message 15: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan laughed. "Goodnight to you too," he said.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
The next morning....

Ryan woke up from his sleep. Then as he turn his head. Hannah wasn't beside of him. Again. She probably wandered off somewhere. He thought.


message 17: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan sighed. Don't freak out, he thought to himself. He then poured coffee on a cup and drank.


message 18: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 23, 2015 04:06AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Hey daniel!)) ((Where did you get the coffee ? That shack suppose to be no things inside of it))

Hannah who was just kneeling down watching the snail slowly making its was to the leaves. She wasn't use to see such a ..wonderful thing. She never even know the animals, leaves, or even school in her whole lives. She was greatly abused by her original parents before she was adopted to a new parents which treats her the same. She watched tentively and she was curious.


message 19: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Remember? You went to the mall.))

Ryan shoted, "Hannah! Breakfast is ready!"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((ahh.. I forgot. Okay then))
She didn't hear ryan's call. She feels that she's part of the environment. The snail slowly making its way up the stem of the plant. Then a chirping of bird from the shady tree she was kneeling on. It was beautiful. She look up and saw the sky is clear and blue. She was overjoyed. She never felt like this.


message 21: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan walked into the room. "Hannah, what are you-," he started, but when he saw what she was looking at, he walked closer.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Ryan was shadding above her like a cloud of rain coming to take away the wonderfulness from her. She looked up still on her kneeling down fixing her head to ryan. " oh. Hey ryan " She smile while showing her pearly white teeth.


message 23: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "You know what," he said, "we should eat later. Lets watch whatever this is."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Ryan sat beside her kneeling down on his knee. Hannah stare at him and smile. Then she close her eyes enjoying the wind blowing.


message 25: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "So," he said, "this is nature?"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Yes " she answered it on her thought


message 27: by Daniel (last edited Oct 23, 2015 06:18AM) (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Well, I think it's beautiful," he said. "Have you ever seen nature?" he asked.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She looked at him and manage to let out a wistful smile. Then she stared at her hands and sigh to the sky. " Remember when we were in the subway after we run from the man who's chasing us? " trying to flashback. " The one i told you about my family abusing me and kept me hidden in their house for 10 years? ". Ryan giving her the puzzle looked. " Oh. No right? I think i might have told you about my family have left me and i was adopted by a new family ".


message 29: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Oh. Yeah."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Yeah. " she answered back.


message 31: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "So," he said. "we have similarities after all." He smiled at her.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Ryan seem amused to it but she doesn't. " Yeah " she said., dully. " The truth is, i just want a normal life "


message 33: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Me too," he said. He was so lost in her eyes he didn't notice himself leaning closer.

((You don't know how surprising this will turn out!))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((woa..too fast))

She was confuse of what Ryan is doing. " Umm. Ryan? What are you doing " She said, curiously.


message 35: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((I agree, actually. Maybe tomorrow?))

Ryan snapped out of it. "Sorry," he said. He blushed.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((okay. I'll wait.))


message 37: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 23, 2015 07:04AM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She looked at him and saw that his face was all red. Which makes her blush too. They were quiet for a few minutes


message 38: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((No, as in, maybe they could, you know what, tomorrow?))


message 39: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((In the story timeline?))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Can what?))


message 41: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((The- you know what, Ill leave it as a surprise for now. Got to charge. Bye! See you tomorrow!))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Okay. I think i get it now. Night daniel!))


message 43: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((I'm back!))

"So," Ryan said, "lets eat."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Me too!))

She nodded and stand up on her knee. She walk beside ryan and went into the house.


message 45: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments They ate chicken and scrambled eggs for 30 minutes until they were full.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah took out her blue notebook from her inner jacket and wrote something down.


message 47: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan noticed. "What's that?" He asked.


message 48: by Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (last edited Oct 23, 2015 08:53PM) (new)

Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" Oh, this? " she pointed to her notebook. " Its from my step-parents. " she smile and a second later her smile began to fade. " They gave it to me on late christmas day. Its the only gift i receive from them, before..you know? Used me" she shrugged and sigh.


message 49: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan suddenly felt that there was someone watching them.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah continue writing her journey with ryan on her notebook not notice ryan was feeling someone was watching them.


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