Divergent (An Advanced Roleplay) discussion

Name: Piper Lucia Hunter
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: 26th August
Faction Before the Choosing Ceremony: Dauntless

Appearance:

Written Description:
Piper is tall, slim and well toned. She has shoulder length dark brown hair with natural light streaks, that she usually wears in a ponytail. Her eyes are a beautiful aqua color, Piper's skin is pale, with her soft features and her eyes, Piper looks like a china doll. She was long legs and arms, most of her height is thanks to her long legs.
Hair Color: A dark brown with natural light streaks
Eye Color: A beautiful aqua
Skin Tone: Pale, almost like a china doll
Body Shape: Slim and well toned
Height: 5'7
Weight: 116 pounds
Pitch of voice: Piper's voice has a penetrating timbre. So dark, melodious and above all, powerful. It spans 4 octaves and chills any listener to their bones.
Other: Piper has a lot of scars all over her body. She wears very little makeup, but it consists of; black mascara, eyeliner, she doesn't wear lipgloss but she uses vaseline.

Personality: Piper is dark and mysterious, she likes to keep to herself and doesn't trust others at all. She used to be bubbly, kind and funny now she is cold and it is though she has no soul. Piper intimidates a lot of people just by her gaze and aura. It is a challenge for Piper just to smile let alone laugh. She is quite smart and selfless, but if you cross her, you better watch your back and be careful of where you lay. But, Piper may seem scary and cold, she justs wants to be left alone, mainly to protect people from her. If you manage to make her open up to you, she will still be distant and cold but she will protect you, stand up for you and basically just take care of you. Piper is really patient and is really passionate about fighting and about her friends.


History: Piper is a descendant of many war heroes. When she was first born her mother wanted Piper to live a normal life; got to school, have friends maybe even get a boyfriend, but that was not to be. Piper was born on a ship, a marine ship. Her father a general of the army and her mother a lieutenant in the marines. Piper grew up surrounded by water, weapons and war. She was used to it, she wasn't any use to the marines so they made Piper an intern at the medical center on the ship.
Piper was six when the ship was attacked by enemy planes and ships. She was rushed to her room b her mother. Piper was stubborn child and went to the deck where she helped a lot of wounded marines, one of them being her mother. Piper was shot in the stomach and was in a coma for two weeks. When she woke up, Piper's father and mother where at her side crying. They had just canceled the life support she was on. That day was a miracle.

Piper was moved to a normal school in London and lived in a nice big house with her parents, Piper was still tormented by her previous life and picked fights a lot at school. Her parents knew the move probably wasn't the best idea and they moved to Iraq. The city Qatar was peaceful until Piper turned thirteen. Terrorists attacked and she and her parents weren't prepared. Piper's father was shot in front of her.
The terrorists took Piper and her mother into captivity. The terrorists did horrible things to her mother mentally and physically. Piper watched as her mother slowly, very slowly lost her sanity and will to live, she killed herself nearly blowing up the whole of the terrorist camp in the process. Piper was then released into the desert to fend for herself. The army that her father had commanded found her and took Piper to safety. She had been living in the terrorist camp for two years, and it made her into a cold, harsh broken person that she is now.

Piper was sent to an orphanage where she was adopted by two lovely people, a married couple that couldn't have children, they where all in this Academy, they sent Piper here to find her place and mingle with other kids like her, with tragic pasts and broken memories.

Family:
Mother: Qatar Terrorist camp, Lucy Hunter, 28, Dead.
Lucy was a marine and was loyal, harsh but caring, she a hard worker and always protected her family, she loved the thrill of any arguments but didn't admit it, she was very brave and one a Victorian Cross. Dauntless.
Father: Qatar in the house, David Hunter, 30, dead.
David was strong willed, headstrong and very stubborn. He always loved the thought of war and the thrill of it, Dauntless.
Older Sister: None
Older Brother: None
Younger Sister: None
Younger Brother: None
Foster Mother: Grace Simmons, 34, alive.
Grace is a an teacher. Grace is firm and speaks the truth she is usually kind with how she says the truth, unlike her husband, Erudite.
Foster Father: Luke Simmons, 40, alive.
He is sarcastic, cold and speaks the truth Usualy in a harsh manner, he doesn't really care who he hurts. Erudite

What Faction you Character would like to go to: Dauntless
What Faction(s) Your Character got on the Aptitude Test: Candor and Dauntless
What Faction your Character Chose: Dauntless
Divergent: Yes

Other: Piper is broken, in many ways. She is a good singer though doesn't sing often

Is that OK?

Is she from the Imagine Dragons music video? Okay. Sorry. Had to ask. I will go back to reading it now.

Yes she is. Sorry I like imagine dragons :P
Also known as Alexandra Daddiro

I have to admit, I started crying at the History. I'm such a softie... Okay, so, I can only point out one little teensy weensy thing. I don't see how she can be in Dauntless and have a foster mother from Abnegation and a foster father from Erudite.

Ah OK. ...could I have some help please?

Yes! I will be happy to help. So basically, all you have to do is change bither her foster parents to Dauntless, but change her parent's personality to more Dauntless. Change Piper and her foster mother to Erudite, change her mother's personality. Or changer Piper and her foster father to Abnegation, change the father's personality.

Better?

Like I said before, the personalities need to be changed to fit the faction. the jobs you have them under are Erudite jobs as well. So maybe don't put the jobs, but change the personality to more Dauntless. I'm so so so so so so so so so so so sorry I'm being so picky. Please don't be mad at me.

It's OK, it's just I never read Divergent. So could you explain the personalities? I'm sorry if I'm annoying you....

Here. I'll make a little list for you:

Abnegation: Selfless, puts others first
Amity: Bubbly, happy, peacemakers, environmentalists
Candor: Honest, will never tell a lie, will say whatever crosses their minds
Dauntless: Thrill seekers, can be potential killers, brave
Erudite: Smart, intelligent, all stuff that defines smart, they will stop at almost nothing to learn more

And I could never be mad at you. Or annoyed. you're a great friend, and you can't get mad at friends.

Sorry I edited late...

Isn't that girl from the Percy Jackson movies?

Yep!

Oh shoot. I did not notice that.... It's a famous face.... Oh what should I do? What should I do? I want to let it fly but...

It looks nice, I like it.

Mollie. It's killing me to say this, but I have to follow the rules that I created. And if I don't follow my own rules, then what's going to stop others from breaking the rules? I'm really really really sorry Mollie, but I have to ask you to change the picture...

OK...

I'll change it tomorrow

I'm so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry Mollie. I'm dying 1,000 deaths right now.

What's going on guys?

I'm following rules and it's killing me.

Just remember to change the girl and you should be good to go. Again. I'm really sorry.

ok the girl is change so APPROVED

ZOE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

((Lily, did Ivy make her character yet?))

you dont need the double parentheses since this isnt an rp just a character

((Naw, We need her to tho!))

yesssss guys have all your friends make characters

((I know!!!! And this is about a different group))

awe still invite all your friends

I did

well thankyou

Thanks....

Thanks!

You are very welcome ^^