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TheWittyRomantic | 94 comments Mod
Everyone has that problem, when you can't think of a word but it's right there on the tip of your tongue but you just can't remember it. Well, problem (hopefully) solved!

If you're having this problem and can't think of the word yourself, try posting here and seeing if any of our members can figure it out!


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Lisa Frankel | 26 comments So what's the word for when someone says, "Mmm-hmm"? Like they're not really listening or answering. It's not muttering. "Mmm-hmmm," he ___________.


TheWittyRomantic | 94 comments Mod
murmur?


message 4: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Frankel | 26 comments No. But thanks!


message 5: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Frankel | 26 comments I went with "grumbled" for now.


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Inda (indaherwood) | 19 comments Hmph is what I would use.


message 7: by Jack (last edited May 31, 2014 11:43AM) (new)

Jack Martin (ohjackmartin) Lisa wrote: "So what's the word for when someone says, "Mmm-hmm"? Like they're not really listening or answering. It's not muttering. "Mmm-hmmm," he ___________."

I don't know if you're still looking for an answer for this, but I'll give my answer anyway.

I don't know if there is an actual word for this (there probably is and I just don't know it). I would just write:

"Mmm-hmmm," he sighed.

to show the overall mood of the character. The thing he's responding to probably doesn't elicit a sigh, but he's not really paying attention because he has something else on his mind.


message 8: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Frankel | 26 comments Thank you. :)


message 9: by Daph (new)

Daph | 2 comments Try 'hummed'. As in: he hummed his reply.


message 10: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Frankel | 26 comments Thank you all. I've already uploaded my book. ;)


message 11: by Reagan (new)

Reagan It's obviously to late, but in case anyone else was wondering, I would have used "mumbled".


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