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Aurora
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Jan 23, 2016 07:58AM
I've recently drafted up a new story and I'm struggling to come up with a name, it's primarily about fallen angels vs guardians, guardian being sorta half angles. Anyone got any ideas
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I just don't really get much from what you posted. Like What Genre, Horror, Adventure, SciFi Fantasy. Is it Adult, Middle Grade or Young Adult. Where does it take place. Who are the main characters. What is the time period? Stuff like that. Personally though, I don't think you really Need a title yet, if your only just now drafting, I'd just wait for a title to come to you.
I'm jjust saying that whatever you coe up with now might not end up matching the final product, but if you really want a Name then I will do my best to help you.
It focus's around 2 main characters, a guardian called Michael and a fallen angel called Lilith. Michael's parents killed Lilith's when she was 8 years old so from then on it has been her goal to kill him, so she causes the pain she felt to the parents. Michael doesn't like killing fallen angels because he believe's they shouldn't be held responsible for their parents sins that got them cast from heaven. Lilith doesn't like killing anyone, and Michael would be her first kill.9 years in training Lilith makes herself able to withstand holy water etc. and manages to infiltrate the guardian's school, pretending to be one herself to get close to and kill him.
9 years for Michael he is now the most promising student the academy has ever had due to him being slightly more angel than normal.
I quite like Redemption actually... as you said it doesn't really need a title as a draft so I could always change it if the plot line alters,Thanks :D
Redemption and To be A Killers are such good ideas!
Black and White? License To Kill? Teasing Hell\Death? I think License To Kill is kind of funny, and it was always going to be a name for my story but then i realized it wouldnt really fit my type of writing


