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Name • Star Shower at Twilight/Twilightshower

Age • 30 Moons

Rank • Warrior

Clan • RiverClan

Former Clan • None

Sexuality • Strait

Gender • Female

Mate • None

Crush • None

Kits • None

Likes • Talking with other cats, leading hunts, being involved, and practicing battle moves.

Dislikes • Lazyness, cats who don't pull their weight, other clans, and cats who pretend they have control over her, 'cause they don't, LoL!

Usual Traits • Headstrong, Proud, Cunning, and Friendly towards those she likes.

Positive Traits • Laidback, can think in a panick, smart, charming...well...sometimes, and bright.

Non-Positive Traits • Can be a bit of a show-off, let's her ego get in the way sometimes, and can be rather cockey.

Basic Personality Overview • Twilightshower feels the need to prove herself. She is proud, cockey, and will do almost anything for attention. She is not shy, not in the slightest. She can be headstrong at times, but means well when she volunteers for a job. She is responsible, and full of energy. With her long claws, she makes a good runner in mud, and a great fisher. Twilightshower is used to traveling long distances, and enjoys going on hunting expeditions and border patrols.

Picture •

Markings • Brown patches all over her body, and a grey splash on her chest that is somewhat a hazy star.

Build • Tall and muscly

Physical Attributes • Muscly Body and Extra Long Claws

3yes • Dark Brown

History • Twilightshower was a loner. She had two siblings, both of whom were content living with the life of solitude; her heart, though, yearned for something different since she was just a moon old. As a kit, she used to go about exploring everything. By the time she was two moons, she had discovered every nook and cranny there was in the small den and the area that surrounded it.
Once Twilightshower had grown old enough to go out on her own, she did a lot. She did like the beach, with its golden sand and salty smell, but she wanted to see more cats and places; she wanted to go on an adventure. She left her family at twenty four moons and began her travels.
When she came across the clans, she had asked that they give her shelter for a few nights, as she was weary and hungry. They agreed, and Star came to know them as RiverClan. After a few days there, she was overjoyed and back to strength to find that these were indeed the type of cats she had had in mind. So, after being accepted into RiverClan after asking to join, Star Shower at Twilight became known as Twilightshower; she had finally found the clans, and a place where she truly felt at home.

DOB • 12/3

Favorite Season • The Dead Of Winter

Favorite Color • Black

Medical Needs From Birth • None

Future Medical Needs After Birth • None

Mother • White Petals Flying Above

Father • Dark Flames in the Mountain

Sister(s) • Blue Dawn at Sunrise

Brother(s) • Black Sky at Midnight

3xtended Family • None accounted

Fears • Being Alone, Dying, Being Taken Advantage Of, and being Mocked

Good At • Running, Fighting, Taking Long Trips, Taking Her Share of the Work, and Leading a Group

Bad At • Letting others be in control, dealing with kits, patience, and sitting around and being quiet.

Level of Patience Usually • 1.2.3.4.5.6.(7).8.9.10

Level of Anger Usually • 1.2.3.(4).5.6.7.8.9.10

Good With Kits • 1.2.3.4.(5).6.7.8.9.10

Good With Other Cats • 1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.(9).10

Swimmer • Grew up in a place where swimming was a nessecary.

Runner • Totally.

Good Fighter • Trains ALL the time

Fight of Flee • F-I-G-H-T, what does that spell? FIGHT!!!!!

Theme Phrase • Apples, Strawberrys, Banana Split, Your Team Plays Like a Pile Of...SHIfT to the left, SHIfT to the Right, Go Team Go Team, Fight Fight Fight!

Theme Song • Here's to Never Growing Up by Avril Lavigne

Other • Naw

::General::
Name: Feathersong
Nickname: none
Age: 32 moons
Date of Birth: July 2nd
Time of Birth: dawn
Location of Birth: ThunderClan nursery
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Queen

::Alias::
Birth Stone: moonstone
Birth Flower: honeysuckle
Zodiac: cancer
~Strength:
-loyal
-dependable
-caring
-adaptable
~Weakness:
-moody
-clingy
-self-pitying
-oversinsitive
~Symbol: crab
~Element: water
~Sign Ruler: moon
~Lucky Colour: silver
~Lucky Number: 7,2,11
~Jewelry: moonstone
~Best Match: someone who is strong and bold yet kind
~Celebrities:???

::Description::
Personality: she is loyal, kind, and dependable but sometimes she is a little oversinsitive. She is the loyalest of loyal and no one ever doubts her loyalty to her clan. She wants to eventually lead the clan. When she makes a mistake she can not get over it until she fixes it or someone else does.
Strengths:
(All under zodiacs)
Weaknesses:
(All under zodiac)
Fears:
-her clan will doubt her loyalty and abandon her
Goals:
-to lead the clan
Likes:
-hunting
-leading
-defending her clan
-spending time with her family
Dislikes:
-when cats challenge her

::Appearance::
Picture:
Body Structure: slim, you can see her ribs
Pelt: fluffy white pelt with brown markings
Eyes: sky blue
Distinguishable Markings: light brown head

::Background::
Kithood:well she had a normal kithood but her father died when she was 3 moons old
Apprenticeship: just a normal apprenticeship just, she worked extra hard because her and one of her friends made a bet. "Let's Who can become leader first". "Your on."
The Golden Years: had kits and got an apprentice of her own once her kits grew up.
The Twilight Years: 12 after she retired she got killed in a battle she insisted she fought in.

::Relationships::
Mother: dead
Father:dead
Brother(s): -can someone make her a brother and a sis thx ;)
Sister(s):

In-Laws: ?
Other Relatives: ?

Crush:
Mate: blizzardstep (plz someone make)
Kit- Robbinkit

::Other::
Favorite Flower: chive flower
Favorite Season: new-leaf
Favorite Time of Day: dawn
Theme Song: nope

Name: Gingerpaw (snap)
Age: 8 moons
Rank: apprentice (or warrior if need be)
Clan: RiverClan
Former clan: N/A
Gender: female
Mate:none
Crush: none
Kits: none
Likes: Playing, listening to stories, talking with friends
Dislikes: how much rivalry there is, cats who cant take a joke
Usual traits; Funny, friendly, sassy, overprotective
Positive traits: easy to like, friendly,
Negative traits: overprotective, loud, once you lose her trust it is hard to get back. Feels misunderstood
Basic persoonality overveiw: Gingersnap is honestly just a very fun cat who wants to be loved. She wonders if it is bad that she is so hyper. She wants to find her place in the clan.
Picture: http://www.bio.miami.edu/dana/pix/cal...
Markings: orange tabby. Some black patches.
Build: slightly awkward. still growing into herself
Physical attributes: slender. Awkward,
eyes: one gold one green
History: She was born to a kittypet. The twolegs wanted to sell the kits but were unsuccesful in finding a home for her. They ended up drowning her in the river. She washed up on the RiverClan border where she was taken in by the leader and raised by the whole clan. She remembers very little of her past. She was told about her kittenhood, but chose to use it to help her clan. She protects the kits of both her clan and other clans. While she is not the medicine cat herself, she has a vast knowledge of herbs due to the fact that her best friend is the medicine cat apprentice.
favorite season; newleaf
Favorite color; teal
medical needs from birth: She has a fairly weak immune system.
Mother: unknown
Father: unknown
No other family
Fears: failure, being told she is not good enough
good at; sorting herbs, playing with kits, making jokes, telling stories
bad at: making sense, being quiet, sitting still, taking orders
level of patience: 1.2.3.4.5.(6.)7.8.9.10
Level of anger: 1.2.3.(4.)5.6.7.8.9.10
good with kits:1.2.3.4.5.6.(7.)8.9.10
good with other cats: 1.2.3.(4.)5.6.7.8.9.10 (she is very friendly, but also very awkward)
Swimmer: decent
runner: doesnt want to
fighter: okay
fight or flee: depends on the situation
No theme phrase
Theme song: Im odd

Twilightshower

- Twilight isn't a accepted prefix
- shower isn't an accepted suffix

Feathersong

- Please fix her personality and history, both should be five sentences in length at the most

Gingerpaw/snap

- Ginger is not a valid prefix
- snap is not a valid suffix

Maplepaw

- History must have at least two additional sentences

Both Histories for both apprentices are more like Personalities - please make them more descriptive of their pasts, not their personalities.

Try something like, more about their families, younger lives, etc.

It is just that they are more like aspirations and personalities than histories as of now.

Parafox{~I am the ghost of times past, I walk along life's railroad track.~} wrote: "So, should I delete and copy and paste?"

You could, but write a History as well.

Silentspirit

- you need to ask for the prefix Silent- in the Allowed Prefixes and Suffixes thread, as it is not currently on the list

Marshspring

APPROVED

Oh, and please delete Glow, Patchwhisper, and Briarpaw from this thread and move them to the appropriate clan threads

Alright, thank you very much :)

Eelfrost

- APPROVED

Redfire
- Please add at least one more sentence in Personality

Berryburr
- There are only two sentences currently in his Personality - please chop up the sentences and/or add more in so it is at least 5, or 4 with one being a run-on.

Ambertail

- Please change the link- it does not connect to a specific image
- At least one more sentence required for History
- At least two more sentences required for Personality
- Please specify why one of her siblings is a kit, while the other is a warrior.

~Streamlily~Be Your Own Kind Of Beautiful~ wrote: "Alright, thank you very much :)"

Np! (XD It took me forever, sorry about that)

Thanks,

Ambertail
- APPROVED

Silentspirit
- APPROVED

Are Redfire and Berryburr approved?

Redfire

- APPROVED

Berryburr

- APPROVED

Shadepaw
- APPROVED

Maplepaw
- APPROVED

TIMMY // 6 MOONS // MALE // NONE // KITTYPET


APPEARANCE
Kit/apprentice
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Warrior/elder

- black pelt
-hazel eyes
-undersized
-white tuft on his chest


PERSONALITY
Timmy is a very bouncy kitten, as any normal kitten is. He also is a real trouble maker, which will eventually get him in lots of trouble. But for most of the time he is the average kittypet. Oh, also he takes interest in the clans. He acts like a kittypet but he has a warriors' spirit.
-acts like a kitten
-interested in the clans
-warriors' spirit
-hates snow
- likes to explore

HISTORY
He was born in the woods with his sister witches. When they were 1 moon old them and their mother were fount by twolegs, who brought them to a shelter where they were adopted at the age of 3 moons. Ever since he has lived in a twoleg den in a small twolegplace just outside thunderclan's forest.

FAMILY
Misha - mother - dead - no clan - make if you want, but she's not in starclan so you probably won't rp her
Cedarstream - father - alive - thunderclan - open to make
Witches - sister - alive - kittypet, will join shadowclan - open

Crush on a kittypet named liccorice - alive - kittypet - open

OTHER
- my cat in real life
- will join thunderclan

Name: Whitefeather
Nickname: White
Age: 25 moons
Gender: female
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior

~Strength: fast and tough
~Weakness: she is small

Personality: Whitefeather is very kind and sweet. She will turn very vicious if you challenge her though. She gets mad at anyone who messes with the kits or queens. She has lot's of respect for her leader and one day hopes to be the leader. She is kind of quiet and shy, and does not talk very much at all.
Fears:
- hawks
- dying
- losing her best friend
Goals: to become leader of Thunderclan
Likes:
- friends
- sister and brother
Dislikes:
- badgers
- hawks

Picture: http://www.freewebs.com/warriorcatsre...
Eyes: blue
Distinguishable Markings: left eye is more green

Relationships:
Mother: Swiftwater
Father: Grayfoot
Brother(s): Whitepaw
Sister(s): Icefeather
Mate: N/A (open for creation)
History: Whitefeather was born a kittypet. She wondered out in the woods one day to see what was out there and was found by some Thunderclan warriors. She talked with the warrior for a few hours before going back home. She went back the next day and went with the warrior to his camp. She loved this feel of the wind blowing through her fur and decided to join Thunderclan. She joined Thunderclan and became an apprentice. She didn't tolerate other apprentices looking down on her and was involved in many fights. She graduated before most of the apprentices did and became a warrior.

Name: Rainkit | Rainpaw | Rainstorm

Age: 32 Moons

Gender: She-cat

Clan: ThunderClan

Personality: Rainstorm is sweet and caring. She is loving and would do anything for her Clanmates. She is very trustworthy and responsible and even helps out the deputy most time.

History: Rainstorm's history is quite sad. When she was born, her mother died and her father hated her. She grew up trying to impress her father only to fail, because she wasn't a tom.

Mother: Mistygaze (Deceased)

Father: Darkheart (Deceased)

Brother(s): None

Sister(s): None

Crush(es): Open


Crusher(s): Open

Mate: Open

Kit(s): None

Looks:
image:

•||• Name •||• Dovefeather
•||• Age •||• 23 moons
•||• Gender •||• Female


•||• Appearance •||• Light grey with darker gray markings on side that resemble feathers/wings. Very dark Amber eyes, with a little orange.

•||• Personality •||• For kits, it's for the clan.
For life it's for the world.
But for me, it's for my heart.
As you can probably see above she is very kind and LOVES kits. Kits are on the top of her list. She likes to watch and play with them. She wants to have kits of her own, she just needs to find the right tom. Kind, generous, loving on all three levels.
You would think she's flawless, but no.
Every cat has there flaws...
And Dovefeather's are that she falls for kits to easily.
She is a little over protective.
If she had a mate she would want to spend every single second with them.


•||• History •||•
It's dark.
It's late.
It's the opposite of what I hate.

As the night lark sings, the night turns to dawn, I must leave.


For dawn is when I sleep, getting ready for the beautiful darkness, I awake, deep dream.
Life is but to live with only light of stars and moon.
~ The night is to love.

I was a kit, I left mama.
She was mean, I found Thunderclan.

As the strange Tom took be back to his strange clan, I asked a question every time had a breath enough.
His only answer has a fur muffled sound.
I shook my head, every time I heard that sound.
When we entered a place where cats where running around every where.
" All the answers to ALL those questions, are here, waiting for you" He said, no longer muffled from my gray fur.
Cats started to stare.
One she-cat ran over and started telling me words that were to quick for me to here.
" Oh Burrheart, you brought me a kit! She so wonderful,
I'll name her Dovekit! " Were the only words I could make out of the red she-cat words.
" I am Burrstorm" Said the Tom
" I am Birdleaf" Said the she-cat
" We are Thunderclan! " The two cats shouted in unison.

After I met leader, Birdleaf and Burrstorm were her parents.

She lives a happy life.


•||• Family •||•
Mother : Song
Father : Scratch
Brother : Shred
Sister : Lake
Adopted mother : Birdleaf
Adopted Father : Burrstorm
Adopted brothers : Sunstorm, Brambleheart.
Adopted sister : Graylake( Named after her sister)
Aunt : Sparrow
Uncle : Jacky
Female Cousins: Harpy, Branch.
Male Cousin : Rabbit.
Adopted Aunt : Stormsong
Adopted Uncle : Redclaw


All of family is open! All alive, just PM me this...
Name of cat:
Adopted or not?:
Role-play example:
Why you think you would like this cat:

Thanks!

Mate :OPEN! Needed
Crush : OPEN! Needed
Kits : None! Really wants them.

•||• Other •||• None.

Rank is Warrior and Clan is Thunderclan.

Hi Sagestar, on account of nobody being the mod of this group, do you want to take over and be head mod? I'd love to be a mod as well, so if you don't want to, I will.

It would be a honor!

Lets do it.

How did you become hea dmod if there were no mods to give you the title? :p

Yeah

If I be mod can me Role-play Dovefeather?

Who likes Dovefeather???

Definitely.

° Name ° Hollykit
^ Age ^ 1 moon
~ Gender ~ Female

Appearance : Pure black with silver ears. Pretty fluffy fur.
Markings : Little silver strip on back of tail.

Personality : Shes only a moon old...
Clan : Shadow Clan
Rank : Kit
History :
None... To young
Here's a poem though
I am silver like the stars
But black like the night
I am the shining knights.

Family#-
Mother : Leafdapple
Father : Stormclaw
Brother : Fadekit
Sisters : Lilykit and Orangekit
Aunt : Appleheart
Cousin : Reddusk

Mate : To young
Crush : When she's an apprentice

Other : None

You like Sovefeather?

* Dovefeather*

Hunter (Totally NOT a communist ☭) wrote: "How did you become hea dmod if there were no mods to give you the title? :p"

No one here is the head mod.

????

Are my characters instantly approved now????? Awsome!

Name: Blossomtail
Gender: Female
Age: 22 moons
Appearance: Grey with small darker patches that resemble blossoms. She had greyish blue eyes and small ears.
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Calm, kind, fierce in battle
History: Her mother abandoned her in the woods when she was a kit and a cat from Thunderclan found her. He took her to the elders and let them take care of her. She grew up never knowing who her mother was or her father. She doesn’t even know the name of the one who rescued her.
Mate: Open
Crush: Open

Can me make 100 cats???? ( Send ya a friend request Jessica)

Sagestar ( Most active person ever)🔛 wrote: "Are my characters instantly approved now????? Awsome!"

I'll take it that way. I'm not a head mod by the way. You and me are equal.

Wanna rp somewhere?

Cool

Also... Shouldn't Blossompaw have warrior name?

Sure!

Blossoms and Dovefeather?

* Blossompaw*

Sagestar ( Most active person ever)🔛 wrote: "Also... Shouldn't Blossompaw have warrior name?"

Fixed that. Thanks.

Sagestar ( Most active person ever)🔛 wrote: "Blossoms and Dovefeather?"

Sure.

Okay! Posted in Thunderclan!