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message 1: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
The best restruant out there!


message 2: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
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message 3: by Alex Roan (new)

Alex Roan (faerrin) | 27 comments Ava sat on a stool at Grillby's bar, munching on a burger. Aban't Un was on the table, nibbling bits off a Spider Donut. Next to him was a notebook with an unfinished design for the Snowed Inn ad she was currently working on. It had a cute little blurb that said, "Stuck in a blizzard? No worries! Come to Snowed Inn! We have great prices!" Underneath that in tiny writing (most likely the work of Aban't Un) it said, "*where you will most likely be snowed in. we are also the only inn in town. no refunds after half hour of stay." It had a cute drawing of the bunny innkeeper and drawings of snowflakes. At the top, in letters that looked like they were made of ice with snow covering the top it said, "Snowed Inn".


message 4: by Alex Roan (last edited Oct 27, 2016 08:44PM) (new)

Alex Roan (faerrin) | 27 comments Suddenly, Ava's phone went off, the "Spider Dance" theme playing. She gave a little "Oh!" and answered it. A familiar spider's voice sounded at the receiving end. " *Hey Ava!~" She giggled at her friend. " *Hey Muff! What's up?" Her friend replied, " *Well, I heard from one of my brothers that Napstablook said that he didn't get one of our new posters." Ava gasped. " *Oh my gosh! I completely forgot! I was wondering why I had an extra poster! And I left it in my room. I can just draw another one quickly though..." Her friend laughed. " *Ahuhuhuhu , you're so funny. Just have it to him by tomorrow." She sighed. " *Thanks Muffy, you're the best." Her friend reminded her of another thing, " *Don't forget you also get paid tomorrow~..." Ava grinned goofily. " *Mm, thanks again. Say hello to Cupcake for me~" Muffet replied cheerfully, " *Of course dearie~ Goodbye!~" The receiver beeped to signal the line was dropped. Ava closed her phone, with a smile still on her face. She got to work redrawing Napstablook's poster.


message 5: by Alex Roan (new)

Alex Roan (faerrin) | 27 comments ((It's okay, I've been really busy with school! >w<))
Ava was busy sketching the outline of her poster when she heard piano music. It was classical music, and very pretty. It sounded familiar to her, but she couldn't remember it's name. She continued sketching, head bobbing to each note. Even Aban't Un was doing a little dance while sketching the smaller details.


message 6: by Alex Roan (last edited Mar 06, 2017 10:44AM) (new)

Alex Roan (faerrin) | 27 comments ((woah sorry, trying to catch up with everything)) Ava looked at Aban't Un and whispered, "*Wow, she's really good! I wish I could play the piano..." She looked at the finished poster, checking for mistakes. She got her coloring utensils out of her bag and set them on the bar counter. She wanted to call the girl over, but she was too shy. 'What if she doesn't like me? What if she finds me too awkward? What if-' Aban't Un could tell what was going on. He chuckled a bit. "*Go on! Call her over here!" Her frequent blush got darker. "*Fine, but any negative consequences and you have to come with me to Nap's house." She built up her courage, but her voice still came out as a squeak. "*Um hey...girl that was playing the piano...can you, uh come over here?..."


message 7: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
Outside of Grilbys' the humans trotted, trying to get out of the town as fast as possible.


message 8: by VGA (last edited Mar 28, 2017 09:58PM) (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light looked at Grillbys as they passed. She was hungry, starving even. The restaurant served as a reminder to that. The last thing she had to eat was monster candy, and it was a while ago. She grimaced as she checked her inventory. Only the butterscotch-cinnamon pie, and she kind of wanted to save that. Ah well. She guessed she would have to go without eating. Maybe she could find something later to eat. "We should keep walking," she said, a wistful glance to Grillbys. But she would stay strong. The smell of the burgers and fries cooking would not tempt her. Besides, it was full of monsters. Going there would not be a good idea.


message 9: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Luna had prepared a small group of monsters with weapons. They weren't attacking. They didn't know they were humans. But she just said the visitors made her feel worried and some concerned citizens stepped up.


message 10: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light walked in front of Jembe, hurrying to get away from the temptation that was Grillbys. She was completely oblivious to Luna with the other monsters, and kept walking to get out of town.


message 11: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
He had a vad feeling, but shrugged it off. He began to ask questions. "So, do you use any weapons light?"


message 12: by VGA (last edited Mar 28, 2017 10:39PM) (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments "Well, I tend to not like to use weapons. Something about hurting people, maybe?" she said sarcastically. "Well, the knife feels most comfortable in my hands. Though, I went to a shooting ranch once, and apparently I'm pretty good at shooting a gun. I hit a target from about 300 yards away on my first try with a rifle, which is apparently pretty good. But if I were to choose a weapon to use in a battle, it would be knives. Not like I WANT to stab anyone or anything though."
((Yes, that's extremely doable. In fact, my first time ever handling a gun, I shot a target from 450 yards away multiple times. It isn't that hard, especially if you have a good gun.))


message 13: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((Keep going. :) ))


message 14: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments ((Alright!))


message 15: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light kept walking on, when something caught her eye. "Why are there a group of monsters over there...? And why do they all have weapons..." a chill ran down her spine. "Jembe, that doesn't look like good news. Let's get out of here. Now."


message 16: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
"Calm down, just dont be seen, and have a weapon ready. He shook his head and placed a hood on.


message 17: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments "Wait, weapon?! We're going to kill them?!" Her voice went unnaturally high. She gripped her shirt, counted to ten, and took deep breaths until she called down and saw the logic in what he said. "Alright... I understand. We don't have to kill them..." She muttered that last part as she grabbed her white knife.


message 18: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Most were young, though the humans might not know that. They were children, really, coming to help Luna because Luna got really scared. The group of monsters had a close-knit friendship with each-other, mainly because there were only so many children that could befriend each other.


message 19: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
"If we do get in contact with them, incapitate them. No killing, or else my mission is a bust..." He sighed, squating down and hiding. Sneaking past them.


message 20: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
One of the loudest was a younger girl child, waving about a stick enthusiastically. She seemed to have gills and shockingly red hair.


message 21: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
He spotted the group. He sat and thought of an escape plan.


message 22: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Young Undyne seemed to be rallying the children to search for suspicious new monsters that would dare to scare the harmless little bat girl! She had taken Luna's fear and blown it out of proportion! Also... maybe the reason she'd eventually hate humans was that something tragic would happen to her friend...


message 23: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
Maybe so. Maybe that is exactly what happened. Jembe gripped Lights hand and dashed. He was quite fast and strong. It would be suprising to know of his feats, but lets not worry about that.


message 24: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
"Look! Someone is suspiciously running!" One of the children called. It looked like a young dinosaur, a female young child, wearing a lab coat, like an apprentice. There was a furrow in her brow, as if she was worried about something in the back of her mind, that she had to take care of and figure out what to do.

((Oooh... What if this is before Chara kills Asriel? Like, right before? And Chara doesn't recognize Light, but it's not an ordinary playthrough at all?))


message 25: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((I like that. I was hoping that they could also maybe get thrown into the future. End up meeting the present Luna and the rest. But only later, because this seems entertaining.))

He watched out for the monsters. Still running away, not knowing if he was seen or not.


message 26: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments ((YES. I LOVE IT!!!!! Would Chara be evil in it? I actually support the Chara is not a demon thing, and the Mettaton thing is a long story with an actual explanation to it :) (Mettaton is the equivalent to Chara where Light came from, and he used her to do genocide, but there's a story and explanation behind it. He obviously isn't 100% good, but he's not evil.) ANYWAYS long explanation done :) ))
"They're still following us," Light said, frowning as she looked behind her. They all seemed smaller than usual adult monsters. She shrugged it off though. Maybe it was just that they were smaller than usual monsters. She kept running ahead with Jembe.


message 27: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Undyne was racing after them. "Hey! Stop! Suspicious people!" She gasped.


message 28: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
They were being chased by children! He ran, but at Light's speed. Jembe ran to a near by bush and hid, along with Light.


message 29: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((Not the same Chara though. And he is evil in the cannon release. I could see them meeting her Chara though.))


message 30: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((Chara could be a dude or a girl, just saying.))


message 31: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((True, I personally have always thought of frisk as a girl, and chara as a guy. But dont make the story of the group just what I say.


message 32: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((I've thought the opposite, ha.))


message 33: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((XD. How are we gonna do this then!?!))


message 34: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Androgynous kids?


message 35: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((I guess, seems fair that way.))


message 36: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((Whos turn?))


message 37: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((Lights?))


message 38: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments ((Alright! I'm sorry, I might not be as active for a couple days because family is in town :) ))
"Were those... children?! Why on earth would children be chasing us?! They're supposed to be all timid and don't like confronting strangers and stuff!" Light's perception of children seemed to be VERY off.


message 39: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((Okay!))

Undyne lifted her stick merrily. "Gettem!" she announced, and the wave of youth surged forward in a cheerful game of catch.


message 40: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
They might have thought this as a game, but Jembe wasnt amused. He wondered if they would follow them out to the waterfall in the distance. "Run." Jembe spoke as a command and darted to the water.


message 41: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light paused for half a second, slightly offended that he commanded her like that, before realizing how hypocritical that statement was when she had commanded him a few times already. She followed him into the area where the water was headed. "They seem like they're having fun," she deadpanned. She grimaced as snow sloshed in her shoes. Tennis shoes were not a good idea for snow. They kept snow out for a surprisingly long time, but snow had melted into there and her feet were starting to get numb. She shivered. Thank goodness they were getting out of there, she thought.


message 42: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
He was already a head of her by alot already. He stopped for her at the entrence of water fall. But it seemed like the kids were on her tail. He wasnt gonna leave her behind though, she was a human!


message 43: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
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message 44: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
Undyne's home was in waterfall, though! She laughed maniacally. She had them now!


message 45: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light ran to catch up to Jembe. "They're right behind me!" She shouted, before covering her mouth. It might not have been the best idea to yell, but it was too late now. She got to where Jembe was, and then ran past him. Something about that young human-fish hybrid monster felt familiar, and she didn't like it. Therefore, she wanted to get out of there as soon as possible.


message 46: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
He had almost reached te end when suddenly...

"A dead end?!?!? Are you kidding?!?!?" He thought before stopping. Maybe he could negotiate with the kids, find a way around them.


message 47: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
((Keeping in mind what you said about undyne and her hate for humans having to do with something happening to her friend btw Ilsa))


message 48: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 288 comments Mod
((Yup!))

Undyne popped up behind them, laughing cheerily and waving her stick. "I got you!" she insisted, splashing some. "Now you gotta stay and talk!"


message 49: by VGA (new)

VGA (themonarchofmusic) | 163 comments Light blinked, before smiling. "Oh great fishy one," she said dramatically. "You have bested me and my friend! I'm afraid we have to tell you our life story so we can rest in peace." She kicked Jembe's leg and gave him a look that seemed to say, Just make something up so we can get out of here!


message 50: by Jembe, Just call me Player 1 (new)

Jembe | 385 comments Mod
He flinched at the kick. "O-oh yeah! And in a world like this, its good to be able to catch a human or two like us! You must be the most powerful in all of the Underground!" He spoke what lie was on his mind. There was a sound that could be heard, like a growel...

((I sorta want the reason that Undyne hates humans... is because she dosent want to embrace the fact that she loves them! If your cool with this, I got an idea!))


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