The Edits, and Everything Else! discussion

Anyone who'd like to read my story and give me feedback on the story-line or the characters. It's not finished yet so a review wouldn't work that well. But I would appreciated the effort a lot.

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Lokrow wrote: "I'm on it!!! On 'Flashback', right now!"

Thanks Lokrow :D

That's fine :) I know it's late (love that we are in the same time-zone).

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Morris E. Graham

I just started a story, called The Play Boys. It's teen fiction/romance. I'd LOVE some feedback :) you can find it in my profile

Thanks!

Hey I'd love it if I got some feedback on my thread Belle's fantasies♥️,my writing ♥️. Thx hope you can give me feedback.

I can give feedback

Anyone to read any of my stuff...
Look at the titles and choose something. I would greatly appreciate it.

Should I only give comments on the flow, the style, the lexicon,etc.? Am I encouraged to give specific suggestions on how to better the sentence as I see it ?
cuz I'm not a feedback maven
Though I'd love to help you guys improve your work.

You're encouraged to give as much or as little as you have to give. Suggestions for improvement are welcome, as are compliments...

I am new at writing & I was wondering if someone could give me a few tips & give me some feedback on this: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/....

Vuk wrote: "I am new at writing & I was wondering if someone could give me a few tips & give me some feedback on this: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...."

Sure Vuk. I hope I can help :)

Nobody's posting here anymore. =/

Hi, I write sci-fi/fantasy/action/drama, and if anyone has extra time to kill, then CC and any feedback (+ or -) would be awesome, particularly on this: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

If anyone is interested I could use some more feedback on my story (: The more feedback I get the more I can improve my writings and make my story more "desirable" so-to-speak aha. I would really appreciate any feedback or constructive criticism!

Here's the link:
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Emily wrote: "Hi, I write sci-fi/fantasy/action/drama, and if anyone has extra time to kill, then CC and any feedback (+ or -) would be awesome, particularly on this: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...?..."

Hey Emily, I'll totally check out your work when I get the chance (: I read the description and it sounds interesting so I'll definitely let you know how I feel about it.

to Briana: thanks! I'll try reading your stuff as well, some quid pro qro for writers :)

Emily wrote: "Hi, I write sci-fi/fantasy/action/drama, and if anyone has extra time to kill, then CC and any feedback (+ or -) would be awesome, particularly on this: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...?..."

I'll definitely check it out. :)

to Tanaz: Thanks, if you want another reader I'd be happy to read some of your stuff as well :)

Emily wrote: "to Tanaz: Thanks, if you want another reader I'd be happy to read some of your stuff as well :)"

Awww thanks Em! I haven't posted any of my writings yet but if you want you can check out my thread Imagination At Play: A Little Randomness. Its not necessary though. :)

P.S: Can I call you Em?

No prob, and I'll check out that thread sometime today (I like random stuff) and yep Em's fine, lots of people call me that

Fanfic series. Warning: includes cussing, violence, Yaoi, and other mature content.

https://www.goodreads.com/story/confi...