We Are Unique discussion

Hello Mad Hatter,
You sent us an email asking how we all were , so I thought I'd share my answer to my friend Yas (she always inspires something lyrical) about summer

'Here the ciccadas have unzipped this summer air and left its heavyweight heat to bear, but the thunderstorms slice and fireflies pinprick the sweltering skin with beauty tasting of honeysuckle.'

Tell me what you think about this short piece of poetry, and please share your summer imagery...

Best to all,

T. Kozumplik
T. Kozumplik

Djinni Hunter

Heya T. Im Maple and I love it!!!

T. wrote: "Hello Mad Hatter,
You sent us an email asking how we all were , so I thought I'd share my answer to my friend Yas (she always inspires something lyrical) about summer

'Here the ciccadas have unzi..."

    I like the sounds and pinpricks of senses.
    The zig-zag of lightening summer days slices through the languid haze and makes the ciccadas sing a song of love and sweet honeysuckle.
    I like the contrast of "heavyweight heat to bear" and the sweet honeysuckle.

lightning and fireflies light the sky, and this seems the time to suckle the honeysuckle with an innocent mouth of curiosity and a Summer whim.

{Mapledream} I hate normal with a burning passion wrote: "Heya T. Im Maple and I love it!!!"

Thanks, Maple!

Douglas wrote: "T. wrote: "Hello Mad Hatter,
You sent us an email asking how we all were , so I thought I'd share my answer to my friend Yas (she always inspires something lyrical) about summer

'Here the ciccada..."
Thank you for your considered feedback. I like that you riffed off of mine- zig-zag of lightning is better than my lightning slices, I think.

Joyce wrote: "lightning and fireflies light the sky, and this seems the time to suckle the honeysuckle with an innocent mouth of curiosity and a Summer whim."


I like that you used mine for a jumping board- 'suckle with an innocent mouth of curiosity and a Summer whim' is playful and effective

Thanks so much for the feedback. If you like my writing I have two poetry ebooks
Djinni Hunter
Honeycomb Poems

and you can see some of my poetry at my website
djinnihunter.weebly.com

T. wrote: "Hello Mad Hatter,
You sent us an email asking how we all were , so I thought I'd share my answer to my friend Yas (she always inspires something lyrical) about summer

'Here the ciccadas have unzi..."

Thanks so much, Maple.

T. wrote: "Hello Mad Hatter,
You sent us an email asking how we all were , so I thought I'd share my answer to my friend Yas (she always inspires something lyrical) about summer

'Here the ciccadas have unzi..."

I am so sorry that I just now saw this! For some reason it didn't pop up until now...weird...anyways, I LOVE IT!!

Hello Maddie, Thanks so much!