Writingtowne discussion

If you wrote a play or script and haven't edited it at all, post it here to be critiqued.

I wrote this for a school project my sophomore year and haven't touched it since.
I skimmed it for any swearing, but I may have missed some. The dialogue is very proper, though, as it's set during Queen Victoria's time.


https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_68...