Tʜᴇsᴇ Cʜᴀɪɴs {ˢᵉᵐᶤᵃᵈᵛᵃᶰᶜᵉᵈᴿᴾ} discussion

When a character is completed, put them here to wait for mod approval. When they have been approved, put them in the appropriate thread. Pack members, slaves, and any other.

Though I know I wasn't approved yet for a pet slave, I thought I'd still post this here as it would be a quick change if denied.

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╬═ Name ═╬

┠ First ┨ Aria
┠ Middle ┨ Tristan
┠ Last ┨ Belrose
┠ Nickname ┨ She doesn't like them, so if someone calls her by anything other than her given name they risk getting bit.

╬═ Age ═╬

┠ Chronological ┨ 19
┠ Date of Birth ┨December 4
┠ Place of Birth ┨ Eclipse Pack

╬═ Gender ═╬

┠ Sex ┨ Female
┠ Gender ┨ Female
┠ Preferred Pronouns ┨Her/She
┠ Sexual Orientation ┨ Heterosexual
┠ Current Status ┨ Single
┠ Infatuation ┨ None

╬═ Status ═╬

┠ Pack ┨ Former Eclipse
┠ Rank ┨ Pet Slave? Yes. No. Maybe.
┠ Master ┨ None as of yet
┠ Collar Stripes ┨Green, Grey, Gold

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╬═ Appearance ═╬

┠ Image ┨

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┠ FaceClaim ┨ Leda Cleland Muir
┠ Build ┨ Petite
┠ Eyes ┨ Doe-like hazel brown
┠ Hair ┨ She is constantly changing her hair, but it is currently white
┠ Style ┨ She really has no choice in her style of clothes, does she?
┠ Other Appearance ┨

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╬═ Disposition ═╬

┠ Personality ┨

It can be said that Aria has two different personalities depending on who is talking to her. If It is another slave or a child, she is kind and considerate. Her personality tends to be more open and free with them, as she is more at ease. But, if you are one of the Masters or someone who is generally a nasty person, she is the complete opposite. She is always on edge, closed off, and extremely moody. She could even be border line hostile to those who push her buttons the wrong way. And, if worse comes to worse she is not afraid to get violent.

╬═ Highs ═╬

┠ Likes ┨
⇒ Her hair being played with
⇒ Cooking
⇒ Salted Caramel

┠ Strengths ┨
⇒ High Pain Tolerance
⇒ Flexibility
⇒ Brave

╬═ Lows ═╬

┠ Dislikes ┨
⇒ Authority
⇒ Being cornered
⇒ Being touched without permission

┠ Weaknesses ┨
⇒ Soft Hearted
⇒ Her inability to think before she acts
⇒ No self-preservation

┠ Fear(s) ┨
⇒ Witnessing the death of a child
⇒ Claustrophobia

╬═ Relationships ═╬

┠ Sexual Orientation ┨ Heterosexual
┠ Activity ┨None; Virgin
┠ Current Status ┨ Single
┠ Infatuation ┨ None

╬═ Background ═╬

┠ History ┨

Aria was not her parents' first attempt at a family. She actually had an older brother, who her parents has dubbed as Zain, who was a still born. Due to this tragedy, Aria was almost not born as her parents were hesitant to try again in fear of the same outcome. Years after the devastating death of their first child, they successfully gave birth to Aria, though she was premature.

Before the events that sent her life into a downward spiral, she was actually a very soft-spoken and well mannered child. She helped her Momma cook and clean, she used to read with her Papa. She was a good child.

On the day her pack was being taken away and enslaved, her father stayed behind so her and her mother could escape, which they did so successfully. Unfortunately, her father had been caught and forced to become a fighter for the Master's sick amusement. Weeks later she learned of her father's death through the grapevine, he had been slain for failing his master.

For years, Aria and Ruby lived a very strained life. They were constantly under stress, always in fear that they will be captured and forced to suffer the same fate as the late Zackery. They never allowed themselves to truly relax, always ready to flee in a moments notice.

That kind of life took it's toll on Ruby's body. All the stress and worry got to her. Her body began shutting down and she fell ill, never to recover. At the age of fourteen, Aria was alone in this world.

That loneliness weighed heavily on her. For years she just wandered from place to place. Her mood was always so dark and depressing, hardly ever smiling anymore. Her mind was an ever dark abyss, slowly consuming her more and more each passing day.

It was by pure accident for her to stubble across what she would call her fate, her destiny, her calling, whatever you preferred to say. She had been on a walk one late night when she had heard a scream. True to her nature, she rushed to help without even thinking of a plan beforehand. What she had stumbled upon was a former Eclipse pack member attempting an escape from her Master.

Aria had been momentarily shocked that the woman had managed to make it this far from her overlord. It was the desperate look in the women's eyes that solidified her assistance in this escape attempt. Attacking the man with a large rock, she managed to distract him long enough for the woman to flee. She herself managed to disappear from his sight after lucky blow to his temple, momentarily stunning him.

She can still remember the grateful look on the women's face once she had caught up to her and had helped her find shelter. It was that look that kicked away all of the darkness and gave her a purpose in her lonely life. She was going to devote herself to freeing as many slaves as possible.

It was difficult work, especially seeing as all the enemy wolves she ran into were not as easy to deal with as the first, but she did manage to save more than a handful of those who were imprisoned.

Her luck had to run out eventually though. One night she had broken into the auction house to free a very specific slave. It was a young girl, fresh out of puberty, still so young and so innocent. The girl was not fit to be a fighter, and at a quick glance you could tell she would grow to be a real beauty, which meant there was a very high chance that this girl would be bought to be a pet for one of the sickos who enjoyed that kind of thing.

Aria was determined more than ever to free this girl. She could not let that innocence be crushed, So with the upmost care, and a thought out plan that was out of character for her, she broke into the auction house and managed to get the girl out of the cage. Things went south from there.

Thinking back now, she believes she didn't cover her scent well enough of maybe she made too much noise when opening up the cage. Either way, as soon as the girl was at her side, she noticed an enemy blocking there only exit to freedom. With a quick command to the small girl at her side to run, Aria threw all of her weight onto the enemy, giving the girl the opportunity to escape.

Though the girl did manage to get away, she was not so lucky. She was quickly overpowered and thrown into one of the cages herself. With a malicious grin the wolf told her she would have to take the place of the escaped slave. So now she lies in wait for the day she is to be sold off. Though it did not go as she planned, she was still relieved that young girl was free from her shackles.

┠ Family ┨
Mother: Ruby Belrose Former Eclipse Pack Member Deceased
Father: Zackery Belrose Former Fighter Slave Deceased
Brother: Zain Belrose Still birth Deceased

┠ (Ex)Lovers ┨ None
┠ Friends ┨ Former Eclipse Members
┠ Foes ┨ All 'Masters'
┠ Pets ┨ None

Approved! Very well done, another killer character. :)

I don't think those fears are fears more than what she dislikes. Phobias.
She needs a rank, too. If she's rankness, she probably needs to work in town. It's more of a loner thing, having no rank, than a pack thing. I'd guess Hunter.

Edited

Is Devon approved?

My only question is that you put preferred pronouns as male, but identified as female which doesn't really make sense. Also you put the pronouns as he/him but only used female ones in the profile.

Was a bit confused as Devon's a female character though Devon identifies as a guy but i can go through and change that if need be

If they identify as male then the gender is male, sex is female, and pronouns throughout would be male

azalea . nyx wrote: "um is reyna approved?"

Yeah go for it

Thought so but school and volunteer have had em so boggled Edited

Approved!

Is that for Skye? Or Devon?

Did you already get the claim approved?

You have the Beta lol. Lupita

I approved Deidrick and Skye.

-Seer of Breath- (Aka Lucy) wrote: " https://66.media.tumblr.com/beb32f45f...

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╬═ Name ═╬
┠ First ┨ Aaron
┠ Middle ┨ Bain
┠ Last ┨ Valentine
┠ Nickname ┨ Arro..."

Accepted doll ;)

-Seer of Breath- (Aka Lucy) wrote: " http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_llg8h9...

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╬═ Name ═╬
┠ First ┨ April
┠ Middle ┨ Jessica
┠ Last ┨ Raine
┠ Nickname ┨ N/A


╬═ Age ═╬ 19
┠ Zodiac Sign ┨ Pisces
┠ Ta..."

Accepted too

Thanks my beautiful Mage <3

dreaмcнιld wrote: "Thought so but school and volunteer have had em so boggled Edited"

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Devon is approved.
Ask KT to approve your Epsilon, as I'm not 100% solid on what she wants them to be.

Thank you and alright

As long as the part with Deidrik in her history is okayed by Maska, go for it

Approved!

Approved

thank you~

Keep in mind that there's the Werewolf island and the mainland. If he's on the island now with Ziva, how did he get there from Texas/Mainland?

Added how he got to the island in

Check with Ziva's history. Did she always live on the island? I thought she did?

It's all good I just didn't say she moved I just always assumed she did lol

boxboy and dreamchild both approved

I'd say approved. :) Was he a Lunar who was adopted into Eclipse, then enslaved in the attacks?

Yes, because he was found on Eclipse Territory

I don't think snakes are capable of friendship or devotion. O_O
Also, language development is incredibly hard. Historically, development should happen in early childhood. Late childhood it's virtually impossible. See Genie:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genie_(...
or
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Victor_...

I mean, it requires some basic suspension of disbelief, but I think those parts are fine, mostly. *terrified of snakes*

I don't think werewolves usually lose their human form or have litters of pups... I'd ask KT on that part.

Actually, to develop a first language after passing the double digits is pretty much unheard of. Victor, that kid in the second link, was found at the age of 12, having spent ~7 years of his life living on his own in the wild with no first language. I don't think he ever developed a language because he was past the brain development stage. Even if a basic layout can be reached, to come to normal functionality is practically impossible.
(We studied this in Linguistics, but it's totally cool. We can just ignore it, it's not like it's important, I just thought it was interesting to bring up.)

Snakes are flipping terrifying. O_O

You don't need to edit it if you don't want, it's sort of interesting to just talk about it. If you liked her as she was before, that's cool. Approved. O_O

Approved, haha, you're fine. ^_^

Kk thanks ^.^

Love him accepted

Ilsa wrote: "I don't think snakes are capable of friendship or devotion. O_O
Also, language development is incredibly hard. Historically, development should happen in early childhood. Late childhood it's virtua..."

So IIsa what your saying is make him older and fix up the history so it makes sense? You confusing me and My notifications are pretty janked up and I didn't receive any of these until now? :/

Either way makes sense.

Snakes are totally capable of devotion *loves snakes*

ƘƬ ~๓ครợยєгค๔є ợยєєภ~ wrote: "Snakes are totally capable of devotion *loves snakes*"

I like snakes when they are really far far away from me or in a glass terrarium where they cant get me.

The Grand Female Highblood wrote: "Ilsa wrote: "I don't think snakes are capable of friendship or devotion. O_O
Also, language development is incredibly hard. Historically, development should happen in early childhood. Late childhoo..."

That was to Maska's character. :)

Well oops. Their was no reply thing or anything so I didn't know. But is my bear character approved? Because their are so many post I'm lost trying to find which posts are which.

Bearwolf is great! He's approved after you edit one thing: He'd probably need to be taken to the Wolf Island by scouts of a certain pack.

Alrighty. I'll fix it tomarrow being I have got to get some sleep. XD

@KT
xD My friend's exact reaction She's had like four large snakes before, Then we got into a whole conversation about it.

I deleted my comments to try and do my part in cleaning up this thread ^.^

Okay. :) Sleep well!

Okay, for him to have escaped, he needs to get on a boat going to the mainland (USA, China, wherever). Wolf island is a relatively small island. And if he returns, there's no Umbra pack on the island. Umbra is a mainland pack.

Fix up the inconsistencies and he should be about ready. :)