Stories by Me discussion

So, I suppose that I will get the ball rolling. I've written fantasy and urban fantasy in the past, so I'm actually a bit lost on what genre this is (if you couldn't guess from the title), but it's real world and following a hitman of sorts. Also, it won't actually be called The Hitman, I just don't have a title for it yet.

There's a bit of swearing in all the chapters, and chapter 3 has a lot of action-violence, but other than that, nothing offensive in the first 3 chapters.

These are the first 3 chapters, and I'm really just after general thought and opinions. Including if you actually know what genre this is, and who the target audience might be :P

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M...