Also; as you can see there are shorter "snippets" (yeah, not sure what to call them yet) in the story that are not marked as a chapter of some sort. Not sure if I want to keep them as they are - independent - or if I want to add them to the end of certain chapters. Also not sure about how to space them out - I feel like "every second chapter" will almost be too often, but yeah; tell me what you think.
And don't be afraid to correct my grammar and the like; English is not my first language but it's my primary writing language :P
The Merging
Also; as you can see there are shorter "snippets" (yeah, not sure what to call them yet) in the story that are not marked as a chapter of some sort. Not sure if I want to keep them as they are - independent - or if I want to add them to the end of certain chapters. Also not sure about how to space them out - I feel like "every second chapter" will almost be too often, but yeah; tell me what you think.
And don't be afraid to correct my grammar and the like; English is not my first language but it's my primary writing language :P