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I start running towards my car.
Nicodemus is right behind me. “I’m coming with you!”
I keep running. He grabs at my arm again, and I whirl around, starting a fire in that palm. He jumps back.
The Bunce spaniel yelps at him.
“I have to save my sister,” he says. “And you could use my help. You know I can’t get in on my own.”
I tilt up my chin. “I could use your help. And if what you’re saying is true, Ebb certainly could. But I’ll be damned to hell twice over before I let a vampire into Watford. Even a gelded one.”
That's the last time Nico shows up in the book. His sister is in mortal danger and he just disappears. It felt like really sloppy editing, because it's not like he and his sister aren't close. It was already established that they went out of their way to stay in touch to some level despite him being banished from her world, so it makes zero sense that he would just shrug his shoulders and do nothing to help her.

I don't think Nicodemus just shrugged his shoulders and gave up. He physically couldn't get onto campus because he had to be invited, and Baz refused to invite him. I do agree that it was sloppy to just drop Nicodemus' character after that.
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