YA & NA Romance ♥ discussion

Hi!
I'm seeking readers who will read my book and give me feedback before it is published. It is complete and edited so mostly I am looking for feedback on parts of the book that may be confusing, unnecessary, make you cringe, etc. And if you are one of those readers who can spot editing errors in every book you read, I appreciate that feedback also!
I would prefer readers who enjoy the New Adult romance genera and those who do not mind somewhat explicit sex scenes and harsh language.
Here is the link to my book on goodreads where you can check out the synopsis
Part of Me
If interested, I can send mobi, pdf or epup - just let me know what kind of device you prefer to read on.
Thank you!
Haven

I'll do it for you. joycedale1983@yahoo.com, epub please.

Thank you, Joyce. I have sent it over!

Ooh I would love too!!! bethanylyke@gmail.com thanks!!

pdf wld be fine! sorry!!

Thanks Bethany. I just sent it you you!

Thanks H!! I'm excited abt it. I'll be totally honest

I'll read it!!! mrs.katstrong@hotmail.com
epub please!

Thank you, Kathy. I have emailed it!
Any yes, Bethany, please be honest! I can totally handle criticism!

Got it!! Thank you!!

I haven't done one like this. Just some R2R and ARC, but I'm sure not that different. I'll be happy to try :)
jasonandkrista@live.ca
mobi works for me :)

I would love to read it and give feedback. ePub please. zpair@cox.net
Thank you!!! Linda

Thank you Linda and Krista. Krista, I know you received my email. Linda, let me know if you didn't get yours. I appreciate all you ladies willing to help!

La-la-loved it.

Posted a review :)
Of course excluding any editing errors.

https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

I would love to read and give feedback - krystalsmith423@gmail.com
epub please

Thank you so much Krista for giving me such helpful and awesome feedback so quickly!
Krystal, I have sent you an email with the attachment. Thanks for offering to help.

Just as a side note, I truly appreciate Krista leaving me a positive review on goodreads, but I totally don't expect it. I just need your honest feedback on the content before I release the book to the general public.
Thanks again for all of your generous offers to help. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.
-Haven

I would love to help you out. Mobi format is great.

Sorry. Email address would help. diana_helen_hernandez@yahoo.com
I'm such a nerd. :-)

Thanks Diana! I have sent it off to you. For everyone else, if you haven't had a chance to start the book yet, I have revised it based on the typos that Krista pointed out to me. If you would like me to resend it, let me know.

I'd love to beta read for you.
Jilliancaldwell@gmail.com
mobi format.
thanks!

I would love to beta read this if possible, lilnatcat@hotmail.co.uk epub copy please.
Thanks!

Thanks Jillian and Natalie. I have sent them off to you!

hello,, i would like to give u my review but i dont have kindle format in indonesia. priezswaggie@gmail.com

Thanks Pricilla, for offering to give me feedback. I only have the three file options. Sorry!

Could you send me the revised one? Its probably the same typos I'm marking down lol.
I'm 64% through it and I'm loving the story.

I just sent it, Joyce!

I'd like to read this one, please.

epub to:

wheeldavelaine@gmail.com

Thanks, Medavis66, I just sent it to you.

i'd like to read this please. prathyushaw@yahoo.com

thanks.

Prathyusha wrote: "i'd like to read this please. prathyushaw@yahoo.com

thanks."

Would you prefer mobi, ePub, or PDF?

You already know I loved it...I posted my review. I will add it to amazon when the book is up. Thanks again for sharing this story!
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

I would love to beta read for you. My e-mail is carasore@yahoo.com

GlitteryPinkGirl wrote: "I would love to beta read for you. My e-mail is carasore@yahoo.com"

Hi GlitteryPinkGirl (: I'm hoping to be done with edits by mid-next week. I would love to get your feedback if you think you have time to read it by then. If so, let me know if you want epub, mobi or pdf and I will send it to you.
Thanks,
Haven

Absolutely I have time. PDF please

Thanks! I have emailed it to you.

Medavis66 wrote: "I'd like to read this one, please.

epub to:

wheeldavelaine@gmail.com"

I love Jessa and Paxton! I relished that first kiss and couldn't wait for that connection to take over with all of the boundaries forgotten and surpassed. This was a true love story. They loved each other long before they would admit it to each other, let alone themselves. The friendship they developed over that year together set the foundation for their actual relationship to work. The friends they have in Chicago are their real family now. That woman that was biologically linked to him certainly doesn't deserve anything to do with that title. I love how that situation plays out in the end. I want to know more about Polly, therefore I can't wait to read book 2!

ARC provided in exchange for honest review.

Oops...I didn't realize I didn't post the stars...5 big ones!

Loved it...can't wait to read book 2. Please sign me up, as I will volunteer this instant!
:-) Elaine

Loved book 2 even more, if possible. 5 stars for this one, too!
Thanks!
:-) Elaine


Inside of You is fantastic! I thought I loved Jessa and Pax in Part of Me, but wow, they got even better. There were a couple of times I wanted to smack both of them. You really feel everything they go through together. I love imagining Polly on stage. I was not happy when drugs came back as a major part of the band's resurgence, but I guess that is often the rock scene. I thought Jessa got kinda whiney, but by the end, I totally got why and came to terms with it. I enjoyed the road trip, especially the patience and understanding Pax showed Jessa (and the self-control!). I'm so pleased to have been given the priviledge to read this series.

ARC provided in exchange for honest review.

Thank you so much Elaine! I'm so happy you liked it and were willing to review. The help and support that all of you have been willing to give me has been fantastic.
I can't thank you enough!
-Haven

Is the ARC for this book still available?If so I would love read and give my feedback on this one.The blurb sounds interesting.If available please mail me an epub or a pdf copy to geets.zenith@gmail.com .

Thank you.

Geetanjali wrote: "Is the ARC for this book still available?If so I would love read and give my feedback on this one.The blurb sounds interesting.If available please mail me an epub or a pdf copy to geets.zenith@gmai..."

Sorry, I should have labeled this post as closed, but I'm just finishing up the very last edits and will hopefully be publishing very soon. Thank you so much for the offer.