The insight? discussion
Let's read YOUR writing!
I started a new one you guys, called my fallen angel, I think I'll be working on that, alone in lands of forever and maybe hard to breathe the most [;
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...my stories.
i wouldnt read the last story.i havent done anything with it really
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
I'm writing eight stories right now, so yeah. They're all romances, but some of them have other twists. Woohoo!
I'm writing eight stories right now, so yeah. They're all romances, but some of them have other twists. Woohoo!
Heres a list of my writing that I'd love critism for, but I'd mostly like it for The Seventh Dimension and Shadows of Light at the moment :)http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
I truly LOVE Kriss's writing!
Ah!
& Shaleee yours is so great [:, isn't the second one with Adica in it the one I red in your notebook?
Puts my writing to shame.
Ah!
& Shaleee yours is so great [:, isn't the second one with Adica in it the one I red in your notebook?
Puts my writing to shame.
I'amber wrote: "I truly LOVE Kriss's writing to death!Ah!
& Shaleee yours is great [:, isn't the second one with Adica in it the one I red in your notebook?"
Thankies :D I'm working on the next chapter for Shadows of Light at this very moment.
;D
Ah, let me know when you post it.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Not so sure about this?
Idk if I should keep going and if I do should I make it long or a short story?
Ah, let me know when you post it.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Not so sure about this?
Idk if I should keep going and if I do should I make it long or a short story?
I like it... But idk... you could try making it a short story first and if it needs room to grow, make it longer.
:D Alright... Does this sound good, or does it sound corny?Like a bird, you can never keep hold of a bird, no matter how much they love you, no matter how much you love them, if you let them free from their cage, they will always fly away.
But I’m not in love with you yet, he thought, I’m not ready to let go.
No, no I like it.
It has to fit in the story in order to sound right, get what I'm saying and from the way you put it, explain it, and then wha the thought it fits.
Leave it.
It has to fit in the story in order to sound right, get what I'm saying and from the way you put it, explain it, and then wha the thought it fits.
Leave it.
I'amber wrote: "No, no I like it. It has to fit in the story in order to sound right, get what I'm saying and from the way you put it, explain it, and then wha the thought it fits.
Leave it."
Okay, thanks ^^
But now I'mma go to bed, maybe...
I might be back on later but its 148am here and Ive been sleeping off and on ALL day so I;mma try to sleep, night!
I might be back on later but its 148am here and Ive been sleeping off and on ALL day so I;mma try to sleep, night!
Yes Amber, it's the one where the girls name was Gillian and she had a brother named Caleb. But this time her names Kadie and she doesn't have a brother. Plus Aiden wasn't introduced this early into it.
I'amber wrote: "Thought so."I decided that The Seventh Dimension is going to be my NaNoWriMo novel :)
I'amber wrote: "Explain what Nanp WirMo novel is again.So I just woke up not to long ago8."
I don't exactly know how to explain it but here's the link:
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/whatisnano
I'amber wrote: "Oh okay, hm, so r u putting Shadow of light on hold?I think their both amazing."
Not and till Novermber, I'm still writing Shadows of Light :)








Post the list of your wirting, it's so much easier than pisting all your writing at once :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...