Songwriters and Lovers discussion

Inspirations: Basically the real world. My writings aren't about me, or about my life. They're about people I see around me. So, my environment is my inspiration.

FIRST SONG I WROTE: - About a girl who dies and comes back as a ghost to haunt her lover, only to find out he moved on.

Invincible

Verse 1
Just stop, just stop think about it
How it feels for me
Now tell, now tell the answer to this
Does death throw out our love key?

Prechorus
Told you that I'll always be around
Now I'm stuck to the floor, I'm bound
And I can't help but to keep loving youuuu
Now tell me the liar is who?

Chorus
Ohhh...my touch is no use
My life's an excuse
While I watch you slip out of my invisible reach
You can go right through
Can you feel the looovveeee I drew?

I miss you.
I love you.
But do you even care?
I'm sent from above.
Want your love.
But is it even there?

Mmmm...said our love was strong
That it will go on
My death cannot stop it, it's invincible.

Verse 2
So now, so now what's your excuse?
Did you even love me at all?
So long, so long our hearts had grew
Did you set me up to fall?

Prechorus
Told you that I'll always be around
Now I'm stuck to the floor, I'm bound
And I can't help but to keep loving youuuu
Now tell me the liar is who?

Chorus
Ohhh...my touch is no use
My life's an excuse
While I watch you slip out of my invisible reach
You can go right through
Can you feel the looovveeee I drew?

I miss you.
I love you.
But do you even care?
I'm sent from above.
Want your love.
But is it even there?

Mmmm...said our love was strong
That it will go on
My death cannot stop it, it's invincible.

Bridge
Now listen
Listen clearly
I'm smitten
Smitten dearly
Just bitten
Bitten fiercely
By youuu...

Beginning of this story
Unfitting in our glory
So sickened with your mournings
For meee....

Chorus
My touch is no use
My life's an excuse
While I watch you slip out of my invisible reach
You can go right through
Can you feel the looovveeee I drew?

I miss you.
I love you.
But do you even care?
I'm sent from above.
Want your love.
But is it even there?

Mmmm...said our love was strong
That it will go on
My death cannot stop it, it's invincible.

wow this is amazing~!!

wow this is amazing~!!

Emily, Hailley, Fawn, Mia, Karina, Sam wrote: "wow this is amazing~!!"

Thank you :D

Woah!

Madasen wrote: "Woah!"

:3

Fatema wrote: "I LOVE IT"

awwwhh thank you dahling :*

About a girl who leaves the boy and the boy commits suicide so now the girl is miserable


If I
(I didn't write the verses yet)

Preverse
You shouldn't have to take your life for me
I didn't know I affect your world so severely

Chorus
So you have left me
No, I'm so sorry
Ohhh I'm so lonely

If I stayed...You'd be here
If I loved....you'd be my dear
If I cared....you'd be near
I'm so lost...you've disappeared

(I am not done writing this song)

About getting back up on your feet and getting back at the bullies.


Explore The Sky

Verse 1
I am played out
Tired of all your dramatic games
I feel so dead
Washed out from taking the blames

Prechorus 1
Thought I was bigger
Thought I was free
Thought I was good at doing me
Thought I was braver
Why can't I be
A hero against my enemies?

Chorus 1
How do I let my name be found?
If all you do
Is pull me to the ground?

So let my heart take off and fly
And let me try
Let my soul explore the sky.

Verse 2
What's your problem?
Why do you hate on me that much?
Am I special
For you to kill with one touch?

Prechorus 2
I know I'm bigger
I know I'm free
I know I'm good at doing me
I know I'm braver
Now I can see
I'm stronger than you can be

Chorus 1
How do I let my name be found?
If all you do
Is pull me to the ground?

So let my heart take off and fly
And let me try
Let my soul explore the sky.

Bridge
So I'm a nobody
A worthless gem I'll be
It's funny how you believe
That you can hurt me

You're pushing nobody
You're taunting nobody
And I'm holding the key
To your grand defeat

Chorus 1
How do I let my name be found?
If all you do
Is pull me to the ground?

So let my heart take off and fly
And let me try
Let my soul explore the sky.

Chorus 2
And now I can see my world right here
Waiting for me
To come and let it be dreamed

My smile turned my new life upside down
And I did try
I let my soul explore the sky

Fatema wrote: "I really like it. Do you have like a tune or something or do you just write?"

I write it and then make a tune :)

Gosh, you're amazing!

Emily, Hailley, Fawn, Mia, Karina, Sam wrote: "Gosh, you're amazing!"


awhh, really? :')

Please read this for me?

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...